The following passage contains three sentences fragments. on the lines below rewrite each fragment so that it is a complete sentence. Can video games be addictive? A recent study by Iowa Sate University concluded that 1 in 12 American children between the ages of 8 and 18 are addicted to video games. The same way that people are addicted to drugs or gambling. "Pathological gamers" spend more than 24 hours a week playing video games. Twice the amount of time spent by most players. Researchersare concerned that the United Sates may be following in the footsteps of South Korea. Which has more th
The following passage contains three sentences fragments. on the lines below rewrite each fragment so that it is a complete sentence. Can video games be addictive? A recent study by Iowa Sate University concluded that 1 in 12 American children between the ages of 8 and 18 are addicted to video games. The same way that people are addicted to drugs or gambling. "Pathological gamers" spend more than 24 hours a week playing video games. Twice the amount of time spent by most players. Researchersare concerned that the United Sates may be following in the footsteps of South Korea. Which has more than one hundred clinics to treat video-game addiction. The American Academy of Pediatrics recommends no more than two hours a day of "screen time." this includes television, movies and the internet.
@pooja195
what are the sentence fragments
Sentence fragments are groups of words that look like sentences, but aren't. To be a sentence, groups of words need to have at least one independent clause. An independent clause is any group of words that contain both a subject and a verb and can stand on its own. For example, 'I like cheeseburgers' is an independent clause. Sentence fragments never have independent clauses, but instead are dependent clauses or phrases. Fragments can masquerade as real sentences because they begin with a capital letter and end with a period. If you read them more closely, you'll see that fragments don't form a complete thought. A sentence fragment is a little like having only half of the pieces to a puzzle. Without all the pieces, you won't have the whole picture.
i see two im lost on the third
the 1st or last sentence?
am i right?
hello
ive been waiting for 40 minutes for hrp im lost
im thinkg it might be no more then i could be wrong thou
there are 3
i sent you 2 in a message lol
ik idk if im right or not
helpp
what do you think barnes
See I see four but I could be wrong 1. The same way that people are addicted to drugs or gambling 2. Twice the amount of time spent by most players 3. Which has more than one hundred clinics to treat video-game addiction. 4. this includes television, movies and the internet.
i think buckybarnes might be right
i thouhht the drugs one at first lol
thought
but i thought it was wrong ill try it lol
hope you do good
@AloneS we need your help puddin
So watcha need?
We have this passage Can video games be addictive? A recent study by Iowa Sate University concluded that 1 in 12 American children between the ages of 8 and 18 are addicted to video games. The same way that people are addicted to drugs or gambling. "Pathological gamers" spend more than 24 hours a week playing video games. Twice the amount of time spent by most players. Researchersare concerned that the United Sates may be following in the footsteps of South Korea. Which has more than one hundred clinics to treat video-game addiction. The American Academy of Pediatrics recommends no more than two hours a day of "screen time." this includes television, movies and the internet There is suppose to be three sentence fragments in it and we are suppose to correct them. But I found four
ik here are my corrections tell me if they sound good im using these three This is similiar the way people are addicted to drugs or gambling. That is twice the amount of time spent by most players. South Korea has more than a hundred clinics to treat video-game addiction.
Yep great. But what about the last sentence in the passage?
i thinl that one would be a sentence a very short sentence but you cant really do anything to correct it did my answers i gave you were they correct
I don't know I still haven't submitted it.
btw my answers just submitted 100%
Good job puddin super proud of you. Keep in touch because I'm not the brightest at English
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