Question

I need a thesis statement. I've done everything else I just don't know what to put for a thesis statement I will Fan, Medal, and Testimonial for whoever helps me.

Answer 1

Choose a topic: Technology; Sports Equipment; Clothing; Food
Questions to research: Are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? And, are they ethical?

MY RESPONSE:
I chose to do my assignment on technology. I do think that technology advertisements aimed at teenagers are effective. For example the Apple phone brand has sold over more than 1 billion I phones as of July 27th 2016. Although it doesn’t say how many were sold to teenagers we can guess that maybe about half of those were sold to teenagers. I also do believe that the apple ads are ethically aimed at teenagers. They advertise their commercials in a way that shows the good qualities of the phone.


Title, URL, and Date of Access

Central Idea
Title: Iphone 6s Timer
URL: https://youtu.be/CCbWyYr82BM
Date of Access: 9/1/16
The phone is hands free.

Title:The secrets to Apple’s success in marketing to teenagers
URL: http://arstechnica.com/apple/2007/08/the-secrets-to-apples-success-in-marketing-to-teenagers/
Date of Access: 9/1/16
The reason the Apple Company is so effective towards teenagers.

Title: The Human Family
https://youtu.be/ztMfBZvZF_Y
Date of Access: 9/1/16
It takes amazing pictures.

Title: How many Iphones have been sold worldwide
http://ipod.about.com/od/glossary/f/how-many-iphones-sold.htm https://youtu.be/CCbWyYr82BM
Date of Access: 9/1/16
How many Iphones have been sold worldwide.

Title: Apple Iphone Christmas
https://youtu.be/v76f6KPSJ2w
Date of Access: 9/1/16
The creativity that can come from an Iphone.

Answer 2

@jabez177 @Awolflover1 c:

Answer 3

I need a thesis for my response
MY RESPONSE:
I chose to do my assignment on technology. I do think that technology advertisements aimed at teenagers are effective. For example the Apple phone brand has sold over more than 1 billion I phones as of July 27th 2016. Although it doesn’t say how many were sold to teenagers we can guess that maybe about half of those were sold to teenagers. I also do believe that the apple ads are ethically aimed at teenagers. They advertise their commercials in a way that shows the good qualities of the phone.

Answer 4

@ShadowLegendX I'm bad at this :|

Answer 5

A thesis statement gives an idea for an essay.

You can use the last sentence of your response but make it clearer as possible.

Answer 6

;-; I may be over thinking it cause it is an easy topic. I mean I think everyone using technology c:

Answer 7

The Apple brand advertise their commercials in a way that shows the good qualities of the Iphone? Like that?

Answer 8

"And, are they ethical?"

Answer 9

You don't answer that question

Answer 10

;-; i'm so confused

Answer 11

Ethics is morals, not the quality of the phone.

Answer 12

in the lesson they give me a definition of ethics it says Ethical: morally correct or appropriate

Answer 13

okay how would you put the thesis?

Answer 14

honestly this thesis thing ;-; it is the only thing I have had an issue with all day lol

Answer 15

I guess I am just going to put this The Apple brand advertise their commercials in a way that shows the good qualities of the Iphone.

Answer 16

@Adrianna.Gongora I think you can stick on what you said:

The Apple brand advertise their commercials in a way that shows the good qualities of the iPhone.

But refine it further so that it can still relates to the question to research: Are advertisements aimed effectively for teenagers. And it is ethical?

Answer 17

A thesis is you stating your point in the argument

Answer 18

I believe this, because this, this and this.

Answer 19

This #1, 2 and 3 is your 3 body paragraphs