Hey Im adding on to something that my friend wrote @logan420 , let me know what yall think

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redeemed1312 · Answer

im sorry i never understood
but know i realize i could
your life is unfair
like some closed wood that swelled
your a fallen angel broken
but let me fix you up its my token
if it wasn't for you my rhymes  wouldn't be spoken
you helped me now time for me to help you too
i see your smile fading 
your turning to Hades and  you acting shady
but ill help then cry out
when i see im past time i hope you sing for it the last time

its been awhile since ive seen that smile
Tears streaming down your face
But im here to be your saving grace
Let em save you
Saave you from yourself
Paths of destructon

redeemed1312 · Answer

@logan420  @andrejrusa12 @SamsungFanBoy @sammixboo @AliMaeHemmings @AloneS @Destinycholie @sshayer @sweetburger @ljetibo @Lexx116 @Da_Kid_Show_Man

awolflover1 · Answer

this should be in Writing :)

redeemed1312 · Answer

I wanted feedback so its fine here. Thanks tho :) @Awolflover1

sammixboo · Answer

Awesome!

samsungfanboy · Answer

:)