Question

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.

Answer 1

@drawwithapurpose

Answer 2

Ashley wanted a puppy, so he talked to his family about getting one. After hours of relentless persuasion they still did not agree, they thought he would forget about it because of his lack of time management. Ashley then created a puppy-care plan and then presented to his family, which undoubtedly made them agree.

Answer 3

all I could think of , tag me for further questions or concerns,thanks!

Answer 4

could you help me with one more question @Frozen15

Answer 5

@Frozen15

Answer 6

@Alibaby

Answer 7

@wach @whpalmer4 @Symone19

Answer 8

ya sure what is the question

it's funny how a boy's name is named Ashley

Answer 9

Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!

Answer 10

@Alibaby

Answer 11

they want you to create a dialogue

Answer 12

?

Answer 13

ok

Answer 14

i'll keep trying to figure it out

Answer 15

i tried but i can't get it

Answer 16

@Alibaby

Answer 17

@Alibaby

Answer 18

mmmm mm i found this
http://openstudy.com/updates/5327972fe4b0ba8d4c41f003

Answer 19

so this is what i need to put
Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!

Answer 20

@Alibaby

Answer 21

@Alibaby

Answer 22

yes

Answer 23

ok