Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper spelling and grammar. Ashley wanted a puppy. He talked to his family for hours. They did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family finally agreed.
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Ashley wanted a puppy, so he talked to his family about getting one. After hours of relentless persuasion they still did not agree, they thought he would forget about it because of his lack of time management. Ashley then created a puppy-care plan and then presented to his family, which undoubtedly made them agree.
all I could think of , tag me for further questions or concerns,thanks!
could you help me with one more question @Frozen15
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ya sure what is the question it's funny how a boy's name is named Ashley
Invent dialogue and revise the following paragraph. Use proper spelling and grammar. Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!
@Alibaby
they want you to create a dialogue
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ok
i'll keep trying to figure it out
i tried but i can't get it
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@Alibaby
so this is what i need to put Leah got distracted talking to someone on the bus about her phone. When she got off at the mall, she realized she had left her purse on the seat!
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@Alibaby
yes
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