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OpenStudy (dilla):

I need help writing an introduction for Starbucks!

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Starbucks you say? Well lets get this coffe train on the tracks.. what you got so far? then maybe we can improve it. :D

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Hello?

OpenStudy (dilla):

Nothing really,so far. Starbucks is an international company that purchases high-quality whole coffee beans to sell and roast. Starbucks has ___ coffeehouses world wide.

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

I know.. Try to start with something like.. "You kneed a coffe break?" or "Like a good morning coffe?" to kinda start a spark in a intro..

OpenStudy (dilla):

Okay. So, Need a coffee break? Starbucks is the perfect place. Starbucks is an international.......

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

That is perfect!! "kneed a coffe break? starbucks is the place. Starbucks is an international cafe for those who 1(love coffe ) or 2(just kneed something sweet) or 3(kneed a good coffies morning). something like that..

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Then do a shout out of the flavors like "Starbucks got mocha, Frappe's, Black, Etc..". so the reader can get an idea of all those delitiouse flavors. kinda bring the word "Creamy" in it.. like "At starbucks, we got Warm, creamy vanilla mochas.."

OpenStudy (dilla):

I'm struggling to write this paper. My introduction has to be 1-2 pages long.

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Front and back?

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Because if its front and back, 2 pages, that aint no intro.. thats an essay..

OpenStudy (dilla):

It's an introduction essay

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

oh.. ok. So continue like you were. then try like i sayd. bring out some great and famouse flavores and bring in the word creamy, warm, or ice.. for Ex: "Starbucks got you're favorite shreaded ice coffe and that warm, creamy chocolate mocha. " This will help the reader put an image in his mind of many coffes and taste that delisiossness in his/her mouth. they will want to continue reading. you're doing good!!

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

I'm already hungry..

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Then tell everyone the kind of service they have and bring in the sanitation.

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

And tell everyone the comfort of the caffe. this will luer them to actually try a coffe and have there own expieriance.. Hope this will help you. and try to write what you feel. That is the very best you can do!! ;D

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

Good luck on you're essay!! :)

OpenStudy (dilla):

Thank you!

OpenStudy (santos.molina):

No problem. God bless you.

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