Question

I need feedback for my answer this question....

1. Describe at least one societal issue that scientists will be able to address using the sequence of the human genome.

A societal issue that scientists will be able to address using the sequence of the human genome is curing biological disadvantages and diseases. People could replace or create a different genetic maker that makes a person less likely to get cancer. People could be able to choses the hair color, eye color, maybe even the shape of a baby’s nose before it is born.

Answer 1

I would recommend to add: Like for example...people could replace... *blah blah*

Like that.

Try to use coordinating or subordinating conjunctions so that you can group related concepts / sentences. Also, try to add a topic / title for your examples. For this, it is Biological Engineering.

Answer 2

Thanks :)