Question

New poem page!

Answer 1

I try my best,
I try the most,
I try to do more,
I try to please,
I try to help,
I try to make life easier,
I try t remove some stress,
I try and I try but you never seem to notice
How exzosted I am,
How I do my best,
How I do more,
How I try to please,
How I help,
How I make life easier,
And how much stress I take away,
And you tell me to do more,
To do this and do that,
To work my retriceoff untill I go to sleep,
I can't take it, it's to much
You don't know how many nights I cry myself to sleep
You don't know my pain,
My tears,
Or my fears,
You have no clue how often I do things with out being asked,
Cleaning my room,
doing the dishes,
getting ahead in school
I try so hard and I go unnoticed, ignored and lonely

Answer 2

Beautiful poem! So much emotion! My only tip is to be more descriptive in the future, you've got the passion and the natural talent down, now just a little finesse! Good job though, seriously, I think a lot of people, myself included, can relate. :)

Answer 3

I agree with @southernbelle00 it is a great poem just needs to be a little more descriptive :)

Answer 4

Cool thx!