Question

Can someone help me improve my motivational speech? I know it sucks, so any help is apprecitated :)

Answer 1

“Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one”. This quote from the martial arts philosopher, Bruce Lee, portrays what someone ought to do to achieve his optimum success. Many of us have gone through situations of hopelessness and suffering, where we feel that life and its virtue runs away like water from our grasping hands. This feeling can stop many of us in the wonder of our aspirations from obtaining our personal prosperity. However, the challenges that each of us face are unalterable, and make our lives whole in its wonder, as it forms a balance with the good within.

Winners are not made winners by their indolence. Winners are made because they maintain their hunger under any troublesome condition. They are certain of what they want, and reach high levels of personal willpower in the pursuit of their desires. People who say that they will succeed, and those that say that they won’t are usually proven right. Consistency with individual goals is the foundation for success.

A really successful person is not someone who obtains success easily. To do this one must enter a state of mind that allows an individual to accomplish their goals and ambitions. This is what gives off an extremely powerful force in our lives. It is needed to live life fully and vigorously. Facing challenges are necessary in order to acknowledge that the pain and suffering that was experienced didn’t happen in vain.
The greatest people throughout history have been able to reach their goals, primarily because these people had qualities of perseverance, commitment, and the desire to grow. They have acknowledged the fact that things are not going to be accomplished effortlessly. They are the men and women who pass the pain barriers in search for the comfort that comes with personal achievement.

Challenges gives us the complementary boost to keep attempting and persevering. It is a state of mind that forces mankind into advancing towards a higher level. It is what gives us a sense of purpose in our lives. It is what gives us a sense of desire and leads the dedicated to commit to strenuous hours in the wild chase of achieving their personal objectives.

A human’s adaptability is unimaginable. We are capable of adapting our minds, bodies, and spirits in a countless manner. But a mishap would be to adapt into a society of losers, a collection of people with a limited will. We must persevere for what we want despite the situations we encounter. A person must not await his aspirations to come freely from the sky: a man has to work for what he wants despite the trials he has to face. No limits can stop a person’s desire; no limits can stop a person’s will no limits can interfere with a person’s desirable goals. We must put our ultimate effort in everything that we do, whatever it is, so that we can achieve success. Like Bruce Lee said, “If you always put limit on everything you do, physical or anything else. It will spread into your work and into your life. There are no limits. There are only plateaus, and you must not stay there, you must go beyond them.”

Answer 2

“Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a difficult one”. This quote from the martial arts philosopher, Bruce Lee, portrays what someone ought to do to achieve Their optimum success. Many of us have gone through situations of hopelessness and suffering, situations where we feel that life and its virtue runs away like water from our grasping hands. This feeling has stopped many of us from obtaining our personal prosperity. However, the challenges that lots of us face are unalterable, and make our lives whole in its wonder, as it forms a balance with the good within.
Winners are not made winners by their indolence.
Winners are made because they maintain their hunger under any troublesome condition. They become winners by pushing past their comfert zones, always pushing their limitations. They arn't always certain of what they want, but reach high levels of personal willpower in the pursuit of their desires. People who say that they will succeed, and those that say that they won’t are usually proven right. Consistency with individual goals is the foundation for success. A really successful person is not someone who obtains success easily. To do this one must enter a state of mind that allows an individual to accomplish their goals and ambitions. This is what gives off an extremely powerful force in our lives. It is needed to live life fully and vigorously. Facing challenges are necessary in order to acknowledge that the pain and suffering that was experienced didn’t happen in vain. The greatest people throughout history have been able to reach their goals, primarily because these people had qualities of perseverance, commitment, and the desire to grow. They have acknowledged the fact that things are not going to be accomplished effortlessly. They are the men and women who pass the pain barriers in search for the comfort that comes with personal achievement. Challenges gives us the complementary boost to keep attempting and persevering. It is a state of mind that forces mankind into advancing towards a higher level. It is what gives us a sense of purpose in our lives. It is what gives us a sense of desire and leads the dedicated to commit to strenuous hours in the wild chase of achieving their personal objectives. A human’s adaptability is unimaginable. We are capable of adapting our minds, bodies, and spirits in a countless manner. But a mishap would be to adapt into a society of losers, a collection of people with a limited will. We must persevere for what we want despite the situations we encounter. A person must not await his aspirations to come freely from the sky: a man has to work for what he wants despite the trials he has to face. No limits can stop a person’s desire; no limits can stop a person’s will no limits can interfere with a person’s desirable goals. We must put our ultimate effort in everything that we do, whatever it is, so that we can achieve success. Like Bruce Lee said, “If you always put limit on everything you do, physical or anything else. It will spread into your work and into your life. There are no limits. There are only plateaus, and you must not stay there, you must go beyond them.”

Answer 3

Not done editing yet, but there is new research about growth and fixed mindsets, look them up and they will really improve it! it's a great outline and skeleton i guess, and can become even greater than what you have already written.

Answer 4

i kinda go syco when proof reading someones essay sorry.....

Answer 5

i also suck at writting speaches, since i've been homeschooled, i don't have to say them, but i'm great at writting essays and stuff so it may be influencing my opinion alot

Answer 6

thank you for your opinion

Answer 7

I've always sucked at writing so I kinda have to start anew

Answer 8

np, and just go thru and try to add in a few more lines here and there, and use different words, oh and don't specify gender if you can avoid it, it can really offend some people ( i speak from experience)

Answer 9

yeah I kinda messed up on the gender part

Answer 10

If you type alot, and your typing improves, so too will your essays, so practice often, and try to not use the stab each letter approach to typing

Answer 11

ok I will do as you say, thank you

Answer 12

np :) and i SUCKED at writing before i got decent at typing. i despised even writing one paragraph but now when im told to write a paragraph, i write like 2 pages lol

Answer 13

yeah, I'm starting to improve as well, its just that I don't want to over write since this is a timed speech

Answer 14

ah ok

Answer 15

well thank you once again :)

Answer 16

your welcome! :D