will someone please check my grammar?
Recently I have begun college in pursuit of a brighter future for myself. I set goals I would like to accomplish so that I may become a paramedic. As I attempt to reach those goals I try to be strategic with how I will reach them, May it be by studying in various ways to how I spend my time. I want to be able to make the grades I need not only to pass but to be able to obtain knowledge that will help me throughout my life.

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will someone please check my grammar? 
Recently I have begun college in pursuit of a brighter future for myself. I set goals I would like to accomplish so that I may become a paramedic. As I attempt to reach those goals I try to be strategic with how I will reach them, May it be by studying in various ways to how I spend my time. I want to be able to make the grades I need not only to pass but to be able to obtain knowledge that will help me throughout my life.

ladycielphantomhive · Answer

Recently, I have begun college in pursuit of a brighter future for myself. I set goals I would like to accomplish, so that I may become a paramedic. As I attempt to reach those goals, I try to be strategic with how I will reach them; may it be by studying in various ways to how I spend my time. I want to be able to make the grades I need, not only to pass, but to be able to obtain knowledge that will help me throughout my life. 

These are what I found. Anyone else can build on from it. 

Also, there's a lot of repetition with the use of "I" but that's about it.

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