Question

How's this?

Fading in , fading out.
I wish you were here right now , yeah right , right now.
Bleeding til I see the light , I know its the end.
Watch as I come in to tell you its not what its seems.
You think its that easy , go ahead and think again.
You don't know this feeling til you are in.
Gotta have the grip of your last touch.
Cause I think I'm bout to bust.

"music playing"

Come on in , I wish you the best.
Move on to her then ill loose stress.
Come on and see what you thought ill be.
Without you here , its like my life has disappeared

Answer 1

@jabez177 @Awolflover1 @AloneS @aly_cat96 @glitter

Any good?

I thought of this and just wrote it down and here it is

Please honest feedback :)

Answer 2

Sounds great, I'd like to hear melody

Answer 3

Oh thanks! Should I make another part to it? After disappeared I couldn't write anymore

Answer 4

If so another part , ill post tomorrow :D

Answer 5

ty for medal!

Answer 6

Looks Awesome

Answer 7

ty!!

Answer 8

Awesome!

Answer 9

tyvm @Awolflover1 !

Answer 10

yw!

Answer 11

@DallasCowboys88 how's this?

Answer 12

Its Good