Question

@deltaforce209 Here's the song - honest feedback , any changes you want , shout out

Put my cowboy hat on then my rusty old boots
Head out the door and I'm ready to go..

Riding on my big brown horse with the rusty tan saddle on the dirt road. In the middle of now where , I cant see , nothing but dust winding in the street . Getting really hot here , 98 degrees , might take a break , but I just cant stand , the weather and the heat , its beats me freely. Here we go , back on the ol' dirt road. I'm a cowboy in the country where no one is to be found one seen

Answer 1

There;s more , I couldn't write more after "seen "

Answer 2

its good i could sing that but not write it k

Answer 3

where it says "found one seen" I meant or seen


is it really good? I thought it was stupid , I was hesitating to enter this to you

Answer 4

I thought I wrote it too cheesy or made it repeative

Answer 5

its really good k dont worry

Answer 6

thanks so much! when I said there were more , heres the last line

"Where the trees aren't green and the dirt is sand." "I'm still loving the western feeling"

If you were to sing it , you can add those last parts if you want , don't have to :)

Answer 7

i will for you okay

Answer 8

Thanks! Are you going to voice record and put it on here as a link or youtube?

Answer 9

*if you are going to cover it*

Answer 10

youtube

Answer 11

Oh cool ! can you not mention my user , can you say that a friend wrote it for you or something like that?

Answer 12

or just say you wrote it , I don't want all the credit haha

Answer 13

sure

Answer 14

thanks , let me know here or pm me when you have or about to do the cover / or done with

Answer 15

I wanna listen :D

Answer 16

same here haha!!

Answer 17

u can do the cover frozen15 k cause like its going to be awhile for it to upload k

Answer 18

Nah I'm good , I cant wait for it to upload :) you already covered it?

Answer 19

I mean I can wait* I understand with youtube its take a little while

Answer 20

no its not that its just that i got to wiat cause im still at school alright

Answer 21

oooh okay , that's fine , I'm trying to do my school actually haha

Answer 22

Change rusty to dusty or something because how can a boot really rust, you know?

Answer 23

So true ^^