Question

please review

Answer 1

this is a radio show i wrote

Answer 2

this is a story i wrote

Answer 3

Alright. I proof read your story!! Tell me what you think, please!

Answer 4

thank you , your help is admirable

Answer 5

what about the show did you read it

Answer 6

did u lik it

Answer 7

No, I didn't get to read the show yet, sorry! I have a lot of homework to do so I only got to read and proof read your second writing... >.<

Answer 8

Also, Thank you!

Answer 9

If you still need some help with proofreading I would recommend you to ask specialists to help you. Supreme essay guys always help me a lot so you can give them a try.

Answer 10

@sammixboo @sissyedgar @SapphireMoon @NatalieF @Frostbite @ladycielphantomhive @AloneS @NvidiaIntely how do you like my writings

Answer 11

@sakash1998 I only got to read the radio show.... Didn't really understand it cause it had a lot of cultural references for a culture I've never experienced.

Answer 12

I looked through the radio script briefly. Does it have to be in English? I think it would read better in your native tongue (hindi, right?). There's some grammatical issues that would probably read correctly in Hindi. Also, there's a lot of terms I do not quite get, with me being American and all.

Also, what is this assignment for? Class or a real show? If it's a real show, I'd be careful about using cancer as a topic, though I'm not sure how the masses view cancer jokes in India. Is it supposed to be funny? If it is, I don't quite get the jokes.

Honestly, I'd try to find someone from India to look this over.

Answer 13

k thank u

Answer 14

From reading what I saw ... You did perfect

Answer 15

thank u