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openstudy100 · Answer

My native country is India, where I was grown up in an middle-class family with financial problems. Whereas, in America I noticed that people don’t value money. The average American almost loses $500-$1000 every year due to gambling and experience serious problems, such as high debts, financial issues, and health problems. I felt very insane after hearing that news and thought if I had those money at that situation, then I would use them wisely because at that situation, every penny counts as a dollar for me.

openstudy100 · Answer

sentence structure and voice improve it please

alones · Answer

Alright, you could say that way @openstudy100 

  My native country is Republic of India, where I was grown up in an middle-class category with financial problem. Whereas, in the States I noticed that the great unwashed don’t value money. The average American almost loses five hundred doallars to - one grand every year due to gaming and experience serious hassle, such as high school debt, financial payoff, and wellness problem .
 I felt very insane after auditory modality that newsworthiness and thought if I had those money at that situation, then I would use them wisely because at that berth, every penny counting as a dollar for me.