My Poem

Fly away with me
Ill show you the greatest things to see
A secret place , no one but you can go
Follow me and then you'll see
Butterflies fly away around through the garden of red bright roses
Birds chirping to the tempo of the wind
No pain or hurt is near , just peace and quiet
Live here forever , no more war
Come here and live with me , its a better place
Rather be here where people don't care about race

Question

My Poem 

Fly away with me
Ill show you the greatest things to see
A secret place , no one but you can go
Follow me and then you'll see
Butterflies fly away around through the garden of red bright roses 
Birds chirping to the tempo of the wind 
No pain or hurt is near , just peace and quiet
Live here forever , no more war 
Come here and live with me , its a better place
Rather be here where people don't care about race

frozen15 · Answer

@Awolflover1  @AloneS  @aly_cat96 @ILovePuppiesLol  @GIitter

fallen · Answer

This is really actually amazing. It hits quite a few of my emotions and tells the tale of a nearly perfect sanctuary that almost everyone dreams of,  just more entrancing, descriptive. Great job! =)

giitter · Answer

^ I loaf it

aly_cat96 · Answer

I really like this!! Good job!!! :)

frozen15 · Answer

thanks so much!! sorry for the late respone  , i was out for a few days :)

lovelynerds · Answer

i love it so much description

frozen15 · Answer

Thanks @lovelynerds!

likeabossssssss · Answer

it is really good