Question

My new poem tell me what you think.

Answer 1

I'm still waiting
I'm still cold
For all I know
times come to unfold
let the darkness show,
please forgive me
know I'm sorry,
if you don't get this goodbye
hope you know that I tried,
To tell you don't leave my side,
please forgive me
for all I've done
not the best I know I'm the falling one,
please believe me
I'm unloved,
I'm better in the stars above,
So know, I'm still waiting like I
always do for you,
I'm not as cold as I was before
I'm getting warm;
before my departure I write this poem to you,
please move on
sing a new song
live long.

Answer 2

It is really good. I like it. =)

Answer 3

Thank you

Answer 4

That is so good!!!

Answer 5

i perfect great job! God Bless

Answer 6

excellent

Answer 7

Good. Never forget that you are the owner of time.

Answer 8

Wow!! Great poem.Nice thoughts!
Keep it up friend!!

Answer 9

Thank you all for the lovely comments :) they are much appreciated.

Answer 10

This is really really wonderful!! I love it @Hope210 <33

Answer 11

This poem is good! To me this poem shows that someone is waiting for someone else and that they just want to see them before they leave. Am I right? 😁

Answer 12

It's beautiful, @Hope210! Makes me wonderfully sad (though that could just be my present mood...)

Answer 13

@MathPandas you are right, @SapphireMoon Glad you like it :) @Atsie Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you love it.

Answer 14

It's so sad but the way you wrote it is just beautiful.
Wonderful work, Hope, this is probably, out of all of your poems, my favorite. ^_^

Answer 15

Thank you @YoungStudier

Answer 16

WOW this is absolutely stunning! Love this so much! :)

Answer 17

Wow I'm speechless!

Answer 18

Thank you

Answer 19

Great poem, I like your writing style. Keep doing that.

Answer 20

Wow, great poem! Very deep.. head up, and good work.

Answer 21

I thought it was fantastic! I absolutely loved it!

Answer 22

Thank you @Klark @2551lw @mymusicanthem for you comments :)