Question

Would love some feedback :)

This is in spirit of Halloween and each of my models has a story behind them with a picture introducing them and I would love feedback for my new Halloween Model, Sanai Youthblood :)

Sanai Youthblood was born on October 19th 1675. On the day of birth her village had been massacred, no one knows to this day who had brought it down. Alvina, the white witch; found Sanai in the ruins of the village and took the child as her own. At a young age Sanai displayed talents in witchcraft in which Alvina took notice and taught the young prodigy light magic. Soon after Sanai mastered light magic and surpassed her mother. Though nearby a town took notice of the white witch and set out on capturing her in which they succeeded in the year 1693. Sanai was left alone to fend for herself and had never seen Alvina again. Though a few months later Sanai herself was captured and was imprisoned for doing witchcraft. The young light witch was imprisoned for 8 years being held in an asylum with no record of treatment done in the asylum. She then escaped the prison but had changed dramatically from being a light witch to a sudden dark one. Sanai set out to kill those who had imprisoned her in the asylum and did so killing 8 men and women. Even though Sanai had taken her revenge it seems as though that did not satisfy her. Sanai continues to live on to this day being feared by light and dark witches and warlocks though no one is able to escape the clutches of the greatest dark witch of all time.

Thanks
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Answer 1

Is it creepy?

Answer 2

I like it! you should post the backstory behind the character, i enjoy their design and i feel like you can get more of a creepy atmosphere from knowing about the character!

Answer 3

Thank you :) And I will update with her backstory @ritoking

Answer 4

awesome! can't wait to read it! and you're very welcome!

Answer 5

Posted it up @ritoking :)

Answer 6

dang, that's actually a really cool backstory! i thoroughly enjoyed it!

Answer 7

Thank you :)

Answer 8

@jabez177 @AloneS @StudyGurl14 @Will.H @Weaver @Kevin @KJSaif @Afrodiddle @Devonhoward15

Answer 9

Definitely creepy...good job

Answer 10

That design is so AWESOME! and the back story is so interesting...wish it was an actual movie.

Answer 11

you're very welcome!

Answer 12

Thank you @StudyGurl14 and @Weaver :)

Answer 13

Beautiful. Loved it
I like the colors and darkness lol it fits for Halloween season. Great work

Answer 14

Woah that is a very creepy image... Great job keep up the good work ;)

Answer 15

Thanx so much @Will.H and @Devonhoward15 :)

Answer 16

UPDATED PICTURE:

Answer 17

@563blackghost

Answer 18

you are awesome

Answer 19

Why thank you @animetrashgirl :)

Answer 20

Nice!!

Answer 21

Thank you @Hayhayz :)

Answer 22

That's really cool! The backstory brings everything to life 0.o

Answer 23

Thank you very much @brooke..help00 :)