Question

CAN SOMEONE CHECK THIS FOR ME

Title: Why we need a stronger government?.

October 5,1998

This letter is regarding the reason why we need a stronger government. The reason why we need a better stronger government is because the congress may or may not declare war and peace, to borrow money or take money, and to build a navy those are some examples of what they can do. Congress is able to raise money but there only able to raise money by asking for funds from states, they can borrow from governments or the can sell lands that people don’t normally use. The BIG BIG reason why we need stro

Answer 1

Title: Why we need a stronger government?.

October 5,1998

This letter is regarding the reason why we need a stronger government. The reason why we need a better stronger government is because the congress may or may not declare war and peace, to borrow money or take money, and to build a navy those are some examples of what they can do. Congress is able to raise money but there only able to raise money by asking for funds from states, they can borrow from governments or the can sell lands that people don’t normally use. The BIG BIG reason why we need stronger governments it because to keep us safe and to keep peace between us and the congress and many other nations. Us nations with strong power is not measured by military powers alone, strong governments understand the standing point there limits. I heard somewhere that when governments weaken themselves by putting to much power out there by doing that they show that they have anything under control and then they get arrogant. The power that new governments have is, the declare of war.

The reason why a government is nessary it may prevent the nation contry/state from going insane and out of order. Maybe even a state of nature and that when people survive one there own and they die of sickness,hunger etc. Governments are supposed to create laws without laws we aren’t safe with laws we are. For example the law we shall not kill if that law wasn’t there and we didn’t have a government to keep that in place people would go on a killing spree and kill who ever they want and a punishment would not be made. People would steal,rap, etc basically do whatever they want. In the U.S. and many other places with governments we are very fortunate to have a government That leads us and that gives us the best right we need a deserve. But the reason why we need a good strong government is too keep our nation safe.

Answer 2

you mean for like grammar?

Answer 3

and punctuation or everything?

Answer 4

both

Answer 5

ok

Answer 6

you need a semicolon between "to build a navy" and "those are some examples of what they can do"

Answer 7

also copy and paste this post into the writing course here on open study. Then caption it "proofread this for me" Then you will get much feedback... Hope I helped:)

Answer 8

@Alibaby