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OpenStudy (larissa):

write an essay of 200 words comparing your past and present educational life. use present past tenses. please guys check my article

OpenStudy (larissa):

Before in 2000 AD I was reading books to learn and searching in internet takes hours, but now with modern internet you can use it anywhere and anytime. Before in 2000 AD online education was not available but now it is available Before in 2000 AD primal schools were cheap but now it's expensive Before in 2001 AD teachers were teaching easily with low amount of student, but now teachers teaches hardly with large amount of students. Before in 2002 AD was hard to learning English, but now it's become very easy with modern internet . Before in 2003 AD you were can walking to school 12 meters, but now you need a car or buss to go for school/collage Before in 2004 AD 2 dollar were enough for breakfast ,but now you need more than 2 dollar for breakfast. Before in 2005 AD you were need 5 mins to go school , but now you need 15 mins or more to go school. Before in 2006 AD was easy to registering in university , but now it's hard and take long time.

OpenStudy (brooke..help00):

It's really good! Maybe use another tense other than "before" but over all it is a really good article:)

OpenStudy (larissa):

use another tense for comparing can you give me an example please?

OpenStudy (brooke..help00):

"Now we have ____ when we didn't have it in ____"

OpenStudy (brooke..help00):

We used to We now have We are lucky that _____ years ago

OpenStudy (larissa):

okay thank you :)

OpenStudy (marziman):

This is absolutely incorrect. This isn't essay format whatsoever, suffice to say the grammar is wrong as well.

OpenStudy (marziman):

"Before in" At least use a comma "Before, in 2000A.D." to make it correct(somewhat)

OpenStudy (brooke..help00):

If you do not think correct. Maybe trying to be a little more nice, not so rude:)

OpenStudy (brooke..help00):

You can't just say everything is wrong and maybe can fix it.

OpenStudy (larissa):

so only need add comma only?

OpenStudy (weaver):

Ayyyy my name's Larissa too! lol

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