Question

Will fan and medal


How do you re-write these sentences so that the reader can experience it?

1. Her hands looked old.
2. She looked really sad.
3. The sun felt good.
4. It was a beautiful day.

Answer 1

1. Her wrinkled, decrepit hands had aged along with her. No youth could be found within any fold of skin.
2. Tears ran down her cheeks as she ran to hide. Nothing like this had ever happened before. There were no words to describe her feelings.
3. The bright beams shined down on my face as I absorbed all the vitamin D my body would allow.
4.The skies were clear and the wind was crisp, Nothing could make this day better.