Question

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How do you re-write these sentences so that the reader can experience it?

1. Her hands looked old.
2. She looked really sad.
3. The sun felt good.
4. It was a beautiful day.

Answer 1

1. The hands of a fragile, ancient women was engulfed with waves of wrinkles that seemed as if the hands would fall apart any moment.

2. The tears forming in the eyes of the young, beautiful girl spilled over her cheeks as the sound of a heartbreaking sob escaped her lips.

3. The warm, cozy sunlight brought warmth on a chilly day in winter, bringing rays of sunlight into the gray sky; encouraging birds and squirrels to come out of their long winter slumber.

4. The bright, warm sunlight brought life into the small city as the little children took advantage of the nice, sunlit weather to run outside and play around. A small amount of wind blew nice, cool wind into the small town, rustling the leaves of the magnificent trees along the side of the streets, while families sat under big, swaying trees enjoying the beautiful sunlight and cloudless, blue sky.