can someone make sure this sounds okay

A starvation diet is a diet in which you starve yourself just to lose a couple of pounds, or more. The starvation diet is a risky diet because you could possibly starve yourself to death. It is very unhealthy diet for you because your body does not get enough nutrients so your body shuts itself down and then you die. Since the starvation diet doesn’t give your body any nutrients your bones become brittle. The starvation diet is when you don’t eat anything at all because you want to lose pounds. That is one of the risky diets, and what makes it risk

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can someone make sure this sounds okay

A starvation diet is a diet in which you starve yourself just to lose a couple of pounds, or more.  The starvation diet is a risky diet because you could possibly starve yourself to death.  It is very unhealthy diet for you because your body does not get enough nutrients so your body shuts itself down and then you die.  Since the starvation diet doesn’t give your body any nutrients your bones become brittle. The starvation diet is when you don’t eat anything at all because you want to lose pounds.  That is one of the risky diets, and what makes it risk

otherworldly · Answer

You seriously have "starvation diet" or at least " diet" in every sentence. Yoour repeating it too many times

ilovebatman102 · Answer

thats what my health teacher told me i should do if i wanted a good grade

otherworldly · Answer

lol hmm...

tkhunny · Answer

Well, we here in the mathematics forum are on a deliberate and intentional and HEALTHY starvation diet - depriving ourselves of all other subjects.  Oddly, we feel no ill effects.  Perhaps you could try posting such questions in the correct forum?