Question

hey guys i had a post a wile back and this is going to be kinda like it but its going to be for my poems only so please only comment but do not right your own on this post please

Answer 1

as lost as a fly
as beautiful as a diamond
and yet as deadly as a snake.

I watch you go
into the wild I see
just as i see nothing to be

i wait and wait
for you
the only one of your kind

i wait
i wait
but nothing seems to come back

as i let go of the past
the future becomes more clear
a distant speck of time

or a lost soul
I do not know
but as i let go

i see
it comes back to me or for me
I do not know

but as dawn moves above the clouds
i see it even more
clearer than ever be for

as lost as a fly
as beautiful as a diamond
and yet as deadly as a snake

Answer 2

what is life with out love-Yinshy Smith


some say
life is better
than love

but with out
love there is no life
so love is life

and life is a ingredient
in love
and in life its self

love is every thing
with out love
you are nothing

Answer 3

I am a shadow
in the light
but in the dark

I find my self
traveling the earth
some where in the future

and yet some where in the past
I run from this fear
hiding behind every one and thing

i hind from what defies me
i hide from what chases me
i hide from what is there to me but not others

I am a shadow
in the light
but in the dark

hiding from the world
and not
the one I hide behind

Answer 4

As the wind blows
As the leaf's on the trees leave
As the words slip through my lips to describe this feeling

As I realize I can't move
As I realize I can't talk
As I realize I wont

i start to close my eyes
i start to rise to the sky
i start to see some one or thing

i want to meet them
i want to get closer
i want to say some thing

but i cant
but i wont
but i must

but i must
but i wont
but i cant

As i get to the top
As my feet graze the clouds
As i open my mouth to try

i open my eyes
and its
gone

forever long gone
forever a island in the sky
forever a dream i will soon come to realize is true

Answer 5

when we think about it
when we hear the word

we freeze
we stop

and wait
and wait

for a moment
for a wile

we wait
and wait

i stare
for a moment

looking it in the eye
so evil yet so kind

it takes away the pain
and yet brings more

DEATH is its name and i hope
if you're reading this

you don't
and wont

look it in the
eye any time soon

Answer 6

and yes these are all in order from my very first poem from my last

Answer 7

there good poems

Answer 8

i can read these all day

Answer 9

You are doing better and better as I can see. I like your poems, you know. Keep doing that.

Answer 10

i read what @YoungStudier had wrote and you earned it @Atsie and that's why I am making this poem for you

Answer 11

I don't see any poem....maybe it didn't post yet because of the website glitching, but honest @Yinshy don't write me any poems. Seriously. It's the thought that count's and I'm not really worthy of the words of a stranger. Thank you for such kindness though! (\^o^/)

Answer 12

srry i had to leave and you have earned is i swear more than half of the people wright poems because of you and your inspiration because i only started writing because i saw some one who new what they were doing and i look up to that so please grant me the honer Queen of poetry/@Atsie to wright you a poem about how much of of great person you are...PS i did not put it up yet so just wait a little bit

Answer 13

also i gtg for a little bit but ill be back and put about 3 new poems up i want to stay updated

Answer 14

You honestly are way to kind! @Yinshy Thank you so much! But please, don't feel obligated to do any such thing! Really! I appreciate that you even thought that though!

Answer 15

The Alamo

a place for war
a place for peace
a place for solitude

a sight to see
a strong building and
a place of the past

this mighty building
is some where
that has gone thru the most unbelievable things

it has watched the world change around it
it has seen things no man or woman could ever see
it has been a place of beauty

this place is some where that has life spread in to it
and will never be torn down
because it has some thing no other old building has

beauty, strength, solitude, and many more things but those
are the strongest of the reasons why
it will forever stand tall

Answer 16

hey guys this was a challenge from my SS teacher hope you think i passed i was challenged to make a poem about the Alamo hope you liked it and i think you can guess i excepted like a boss

Answer 17

I like it. The beat is nice. @Yinshy

Answer 18

thanks @SapphireMoon

Answer 19

Out of curiosity, what IS the Alamo? I've never heard of it.

Answer 20

Well obvi not everyone, lol. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Battle_of_the_Alamo @Atsie

Answer 21

There was this person on another study site once that asked "What is 9/11?"
Someone else replied "WHAT!? How do you not know what 9/11 is you dumb f-er"
I stepped in, explained what 9/11 was and even researched it so the person could gain more info about it. Then I told the person who was appalled at this that every human being is different and everybody is from someplace different and that being interested in something you don't know about is better than playing blind and not knowing anything.
I didn't know about the Alamo, and I'm certain there are others who don't know about it either, but it makes me happy that I didn't know because now I just learned something new and I now would have more appreciation for your poem. @Yinshy

Answer 22

And thank you for researching it for me ^.^ @SapphireMoon I appreciate it! :))

Answer 23

yw :) Though you would think that'd be something you'd go over in some history class in your life... XD

Answer 24

Nope, not one history class of mine has ever spoken about it.

Answer 25

Blamed for some thing i did not know
hurt for some thing i did not do

they say it was me
they want me to be the one who did it

even tho im not
even tho i know im not

they make me feel like i did this to every one
that i let every one down

but i didn't
they let me down
they are the ones to blame

not me
not you

them
all of them

not me
not you

Answer 26

i am some one
and yet no one

no one knows me for great
but disappointment

im not close to perfect
or horrible

i am some one who decides to hide from the fight and step in when it is to late and end up
hurting my self or others

i am some one who decides to try when there is no point
i am me the one of my kind and i know that im not good but great and i know im not perfect but then again no one is
i am simple me even if they say im a sheep and fallow the herd i am some one a leader covered in dust and cobwebs i know im much more that what others say i am me

Answer 27

i messed up kinda on the grammar and spelling but you should get it

Answer 28

So you wrote this?

Answer 29

all of the poems on here that have my names on them i wrote sooo yeah

Answer 30

name

Answer 31

wow they sound great!

Answer 32

I like "i am the shadow"

Answer 33

They're also nice.

Answer 34

Apology accepted :) @Yinshy No hard feelings, its okay! ^.^

Answer 35

as i walk
i start to wonder if some one is watching

as i run
some thing moves with me

as if it was mimicking me
as if it was me

as i stop
it stop

as i stop for a moment to look its
as if it stops for the same reason

as i start to get to the end of my days jog
i start to for get about the thing

as i start to forget
it starts to mimic me again

as i start to go faster
so does it

as i get to the end of the trail in the forest
i stop and so does it

as i open my mouth to ask if any one is there it moves tord me
and i stop and freeze and then run for my house

as i get home i open the door
and try to forget that thing

as i get ready to go to bed
some thing sits in the shadows the room

as i try to get up it moves closer making sure
not to reveal its self but

as i try to get up to face it face to face
it moves back

as if fascinated with me but not
wanting to get to close

as i try to say what are you
who are you it disappears

as i look around i hear some thing
charge me and i fall in to a bottomless pit

as i fall i relies that its all
just a dream i open my eyes and am in a bad fever

as i get up i rush to the bathroom
and splash my face with water

as i am looking down at the sink i hear some thing
and decide to look up and there it is in the mirror looking so scared with a knife

as i try to run
i feel a pain

as i fall to the ground
my vision starts to fog and i...

Answer 36

hey every one this was just a thing i decided to right of the top of my head worked on it for a wile and im a fan of creepy pastas so this was a small story i wrote and if you dont know what that is i sugest you look it up there scary and some times not even that there basicly rlly good stories that i listen to for hours on end

Answer 37

@Atsie

Answer 38

Not bad at all for a spin on a creepy pasta type feel! ^.^

Answer 39

thx

Answer 40

she teaches me and my friends
for joy and because its her job
even if the smile she wears is a mask

she can be so easy to figure out some times
and others she can be as stubborn as a mule
she makes sure we understand

she makes you know whats wrong and why
she is there for you when you need a helping hand
she is the on who will be there when you succeed

because she is the one who helped get you there
because for you to succeed is for her to succeed
because she enjoys seeing you smile so that she may smile

and last but not least
she is a teacher she is some one will always be there
when you need that helping hand and she knows when she needs that helping hand we will be right there right beside her every inch of the way just as she was for us

Answer 41

hey every one this goes out to all of my teachers

Answer 42

and every one ells-es teachers ps all my teachers at my school are girls thats why it says she and not he but if you want to share this poem to your teachers go ahead might need to change the wording tho and please dont steal my work because i work hard to make these poems and i would be really sad if they were used with out my permission

Answer 43

@Atsie

Answer 44

@563blackghost

Answer 45

@Ms-Brains

Answer 46

this goes out to @Atsie


she can make your day by just the smallest of words
she can be the one to open you mind to the biggest things
she can see what no one else can even in the dark

she is a strong woman
she is some one who has knowledge
she is as majestic as a wizard but the wizard of poems shooting them here and there

she can't be defeated even in a war against the world
she is a queen that has control of a world unknown
she will be there when you need some one to cry on

because she is a friend
because she is a queen
because she is some one who knows things see things and can be there to wright a poem just for you and make your day because she is some one and not any one she is @Atsie

Answer 47

have a great day/night Ms @Atsie

Answer 48

Gosh, that was so so so kind of you!! Thank you so much @Yinshy ^.^
I know we hardly know each other, but if this is what you think of me just from barely any conversation, it makes me want to try harder and harder as a person to be something for somebody. It made me smile probably quite tiredly (because I AM tired) but, I've got a smile as big as the grand canyon in my heart! Thank you!!! <33

Answer 49

@Elsa213

Answer 50

@Ms-Brains

Answer 51

please read all my hand made poems if it had my name on it i wrote it

Answer 52

has*

Answer 53

hello @Atsie

Answer 54

I'm here.
Hello! ^.^
I'm taking you up on your challenge and doing schoolwork at the same time.

Answer 55

I am 17. You?

Answer 56

^.^ Kewl!

Answer 57

Michigan

Answer 58

Good ole' Detroit ^.^

Answer 59

it keeps saying im typing when im not and when i am it says im not

Answer 60

Close to halfway. :)

Yesh, sometimes OpenStudy glitches a lot and says someone is typing when they aren't or vice versa.

Answer 61

i feel like you would be a fun person to hang out with xD

Answer 62

Eh, I'm crazy, sarcastic, weird, etc, etc. xDD

Answer 63

so y7ou would be fun you hang with xD

Answer 64

Haha!!

Answer 65

I don't think I have any of those actually. Hmm :/

Answer 66

I do have a computer, but i don't know what discord or stream is to be honest.

Answer 67

Oo, okay. Welp, I don't play games actually and can't even make time for that really because my studies take up my life and I'm always behind.

Answer 68

Hmm, this was an attempt to at LEAST writing something about myself and kinda what am and what I wanna do for others.......I dunno if it came out that great, but oh well.

THESE BONES OF MINE

Stretch in my depth
I encourage
whomever to walk in
secrets I've kept
For I tell you two
or three
things about
me inside of me.

I'm bark upon wood
gnarled beauty
wherever leaves yearn far
towards bad or good
In which nothing lies
inhibited
or stolen away.

Imperfection is a backbone
where pride
perfects the ego
and smiles from stone
Yet my heart lifts
when given
opportunity
for giving gifts

And in love friend,
hugging you
these bones of mine
therefore do bend
So that faltering strength
can send
whatever I have
to you.

Answer 69

Thanks ^.^

Answer 70

I tried to stay away
I dont know why i did it

maby its because im a bad person
maby its because im stupid and have no respect

or im just some one who does not care
or im just some one who is broken

i try to hide but you always find me
i try to not do any thing but always end up messing up

i feel guilt when i wake
i feel it when i try to stay away and when you find out

i dont know what im doing
im hurting my self mentally

and i every day i do it less and less
and then you find me and it makes me feel like ive made no progress

so im sorry im a broken person
so im sorry i have no respect
so im sorry im a forsaken person
so im sorry you wont forgive me for my sins
so im sorry i am some one who is slowly learning and need time and not punishment

every time you find me
that is enough to help me learn not to do what i do

so even if you dont read this im sorry
and i hope you forgive me even if you dont
i hope you do know i am sorry

Answer 71

hey @Atsie totally random question where did you get your picture???

Answer 72

My profile picture?

Answer 73

yeah the girl holding a broom

Answer 74

It's not a broom xD It's a guitar. Look closer, it'll look more like it.
I don't really remember where I got that though. I just kinda resonated with it.

Answer 75

ohhh ok well thanks

Answer 76

:)

Answer 77

cool

Answer 78

whats cool huh?

Answer 79

This is William Travis
I hear the guns blazing
and the cannons blasting at us

I do not know if this letter will find its way to help
and i do not know if any one is reading this letter
we are fighting as hard as possible

there are few of us and what looks like a 100 of them
they have more than we do in some ways
and not others

we have more will to survive and we have more spirit
we are strong but not strong enough
but we are ready to try to fight for whats right

i am pretending to stay calm
i am pretending to be big
so my men might live another day

so if you reading this letter please help
i do not know if we will live but if we do not i want
the United states to know what i fought for what we fought for

because i know we will be remembered
for fight for what was right
for freedom and independence

as i wait for reinforcements that i am more and more sure
little by little that we will not receive reinforcements
so if your reading this i hope you send help to me and my mighty men

so if your reading this i hope you know we fought for whats right
so if your reading this i hope you understand
so if your reading this i hope you know i want us to be remembered for what we did

Answer 80

^Interesting, your style is in this format of talking usually in all of your poems. What is this one about though? Like an American Soldier fighting oversea's for the US?

Answer 81

this is just another challenge from my teacher and if i win this poem contest i entered into i can possibly win 20 dollars!

Answer 82

and my teacher says im one of the top people

Answer 83

Ooo, thats great!! Keep it up!

Answer 84

How do you fix a broken heart by Yinshy Smith

some will say
some one has a broken heart

and others ask how do you
fix some thing like that
and it all comes down to

what kind of heart you have
weather its made of metal or cloth
weather its gentle or rough

there is always a way to fix
a broken or torn heart
it may take time

it may take patients
and it will take love
and care

but even when you
have no more choices
you will always have a heart

Answer 85

open you eyes to all the sights that you see
and
close them when you want to dream

there will be a time when you wake
to see this world and the will see you

i know that we cant wait
for love all of the time

we might think
for a moment
or wile but you need to know

that you need to
open your eye to all the sights you see
and
close them for the dreamer sleep

just so that we may see

Answer 86

@Atsie

Answer 87

<33 interesting poem Yinshy! ^.^

Answer 88

well the last one i wrote was song lyrics

Answer 89

beautiful poems, they are all yours?

Answer 90

what is the problem? i didnt get that.. you want to get feedback? :)

Answer 91

I just read through your poems, they're great!

Answer 92

and yes they are all mine