Can someone look over my Outline and stuff for my research paper? Does it look okay? Do you think I can find enough information?

Question

batman* · Answer

Is there a balance between caffeine and technology use with respect to sleep duration?

I.	Thesis – Technology and caffeine use among Adolescents and college students lead to insufficient sleep duration, which in return, effects their mental and emotional health.
II.	Body – How technology its effect on student’s ability to sleep, Caffeine and how it affects a student’s ability to sleep, the short and long term mental health effects of a lack of sleep among college students.
a.	Technology and its effect on student’s ability to sleep (Try to find a balance between)
1.	What part of technology effects sleep?
2.	How does it affect sleep?
i.	Balance?
b.	Caffeine and its effect on students sleep (Is there balance?)
1.	The chemical process on how caffeine works
2.	The short and long term effects on caffeine use.
i.	Balance?
c.	Mental health issues related to lack of sleep, more specifically relating to technology and caffeine use.
1.	P300 waves
2.	Disruption of sleep pattern
3.	Students experiences
III.	Conclusion.

hannah909 · Answer

This looks alright so far unless you have o answer your questions in your outline. Other than that it looks well thought out and organized. What grade are you in?

batman* · Answer

I will answer them in the essay. Its not too broad? Too narrow? This essay is due in two days. 10 pages. lol

hannah909 · Answer

Oh then this is probably not enough information for a ten page essay. Even if it is double spaced, if you don't have more information than this it may seem as if you are rambling.

batman* · Answer

There is alot of information in this area. each section will take more than just a paragraph. My professor wants me to define everything.

hannah909 · Answer

Hm, I still suggest adding more but whatever you think is best.

klark · Answer

That looks good. The only thing I would recommend you is do not forget to proofread it. I usually ask supreme essay guys to help me with this. So if you want you can check it. Or you can ask someone to help you with it. I'm sure that would be great if someone will take a look.