Question

HELP ASAP!! DUE TOMORROW!! WILL MEDAL THE FIRST PERSON TO HELP!!
I need to finish my new copy which needs to have a thesis and reasons

My old copy: http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/580fbdcae4b012711f1be0c1-ilovemath14-1477426731872-image.jpeg

My new copy: http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/580fd750e4b012711f1bf796-ilovemath14-1477433217335-image.jpeg

Answer 1

Ok. So a thesis statement is basically just a claim. It's something like:
"Greenhouse gasses negatively affect the environment because. . ."
Each reason after then can be a new section of your essay.
Whatever you do, DO NOT ASK RHETORICAL QUESTIONS!!!! They will only cause you pain.
Also, use the sources and expound on them. Relate it back to your main claim.
For transitions, think about how one topic relates to another, like how car emissions relate to factory pollution or something like that. I find it easier to tie your topic back to your main claim/thesis.
I can attach a sample of writing if you want.