Question

just need an A

Answer 1

@Jamierox4ev3r

Answer 2

Your essay will include:

- A clear thesis statement

- 3 or more reasons given in separate paragraphs and are supported with strong evidence.

- Specific evidence (quotes) from at least 10 different documents in packet.

- Analysis in the form of Say-Mean-Matter that explains how each quote supports the thesis statement. This is the evaluative technique piece for each evidence you discuss. State the evidence, explain what it means and how it matters to your thesis.

- Use in-text citations that show which primary documents are used.

Answer 3

does my essay fit this criteria just enough for an A or B

Answer 4

@Will.H

Answer 5

Uhh, sorry, dude. I am not that good at writing. Please, message me, I will share with you how I usually solve this trouble.

Answer 6

I've attached a revised copy of your essay. Just a few tweaks here and there for grammatical continuity. I did however delete your conclusion paragraph, due to the fact that I would like you to go and rewrite it. A conclusive paragraph should not simply be talking about how the information you used matches with history. Not the way you worded in anyhow. Go back and restate your thesis, writing a sentence or so covering each point. If you need any additional help, feel free to contact me on here. I hope this helped!

Answer 7

Also, (I'm not sure where you're from or what grade level you are) papers are usually in Times New Roman Font in a 12 point font, and can be double spaced.

Answer 8

Also, it is way better to turn to the professionals for this help. Who has ever used online writing services, raise your hand. And I did it and feel ok about it. At least, I was sure that paper deserved the highest grade. So, do not rely much on free help. I prefer using Marvelous Essay instead