Question

There is a void in my heart,
that wont fill

A pain in my soul,
that will not subside

A broken dream,
that wont mend

How wretched,
a defiled woman

Her true story,
but words unspoken

Answer 1

this amazing <3

Answer 2

:)

Answer 3

hayz

Answer 4

;-;

Answer 5

Good effort but no rhyme scheme ;-;

Answer 6

Hayyzy <3

Answer 7

my heart dont rhyme

Answer 8

I hope you're okay. This piece is beautiful, and it is obvious that you're writing this from personal experience. Keep up the great work!

Answer 9

Nicely done :D
Keep it up

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Answer 10

mayday with the promo i see ;)