Question

like a firefly -Redemption album
finally finished my song somewhat i got the lyrics down so far
might make some changes again any thought and hears a country instrumental called firefly
and i feel like they tie together good but what do you guys think
https://youtu.be/1NpRPYrhMxc

Answer 1

Deer, heavenly father
You put me here for a reason
But what is my purpose
You gave me the gift of sight
But I still feel so blind as what I am supposed to be seeing
Why god why is it I cry
Every time I look up at the sky
Asking for you aid
Why god why do I feel so betrayed
Down on my knees should I steer
To whomever I can hear
Why god why should I even try
If I’ll just struggle and die
With all the anger and hate
Why god why would you even create
Why can we just love one another?
Like as if we were all sister and brother
Why god why do people have all these lies
Why can’t there be beauty in us like fireflies
Do you hear the cries from one to another?
Why god why bother
Why god why can’t you hear our pain
Can you sense our fear?
Why god why me
Why so cruel
Can’t you see I'm not a tool?
In your box
I said I'm Down on my knees should I steer
To whomever can hear
I'm asking for you aid
Why god why do I feel so betrayed
Why god why do people have all these lies
Why can’t there be beauty in us like fireflies
Why god why is it I cry
Every time I look up at the sky
I'm asking for you aid
Why god why do I feel so betrayed
Do you hear the cries from one to another?
Why god why bother
Why god why can’t you hear our pain
Can you sense our fear?
Why god why me
Why so cruel
Can’t you see I'm not a tool?
In your box
flutter it and erase it all
Let mankind be their own downfall

Answer 2

Good job I like it