Add adjectives to improve the following passage.

The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

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Add adjectives to improve the following passage.


The man stopped by the park to pet the dog. Then he stepped into the bus. The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant. He jumped out and ran up the steps. A while later, he returned with a bag of scraps for the dog.

aveline · Answer

Do you know what an adjective is?

evansanchez · Answer

a word or phrase naming an attribute, added to or grammatically related to a noun to modify or describe it.

shadowlegendx · Answer

"The bus made stops before it pulled up in front of a(n) restaurant."

When they used a(n) they divulged how they wanted you to go about with completing this assignment. As you may know, a and an are both determiners, used before a noun to make reference to them

"a cat, an acrobat, etc"

An however, is only used before a word that starts with vowel. 

They put a(n) before restaurant in case the adjective you used to describe the restaurant, started with a vowel, such as "an elegant restaurant" for example.

shadowlegendx · Answer

All you have to do, to complete this assignment, is describe the nouns in this passage. 

Nouns: 
man
park
dog
bus
restaurant
steps
bag
scraps
dog(again)

Describe the man, was he athletic, blonde, African-American, etc
Was the park nice, cold, breezy?
A sleek dog? A furry dog?
It's that simple

shadowlegendx · Answer

Let me know if you need any further help with this assignment

likeabossssssss · Answer

^^