You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.

After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.

Which choice is the best answer?

There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.
After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.
A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.
Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

Question

You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.

After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.

Which choice is the best answer?

 There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.
 After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.
 A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.
 Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

bear17bear · Answer

Based on what I said in the last question what do you think it is?

lonelyy__ · Answer

I thought that there was nothing wrong with it, but maybe the second one

bear17bear · Answer

If you are stuck, I would recommend canceling some options out, do any f the sentences seem to have dangling modifiers?

lonelyy__ · Answer

The last one doesn't sound right

bear17bear · Answer

I agree so A B C are left.

lonelyy__ · Answer

alright

lonelyy__ · Answer

A is wrong

bear17bear · Answer

In my opinion, C seems like a run-on.

bear17bear · Answer

I think B flows pretty well and the modifiers seem to be in the right place, do you agree?

lonelyy__ · Answer

Yes, C seems like it could use a comma, or be broken into two sentences

lonelyy__ · Answer

thank you