Question

Please read over my research paper.. I'm in need of ideas for a title

Answer 1

Topic: Fast food, processed foods and obesity: about the toxicity and how this increased the obesity rate in the last year(s)

Answer 2

I also need the title page looked over (I have never done one before), image ideas to include.

Does the reference page need to be double spaced?

Answer 3

Your title page looks fine.

Answer 4

Okay. Any ideas on a title?

Answer 5

Your reference page is also formatted correctly.

Let me read through what you've written and see if I can generate any ideas for a title.

Answer 6

Okay thank you

Answer 7

Hmmm...

"The Role Fast Food Plays in the Increasing Rates of Obesity"

Or a simplified version:

"Fast Food and Obesity Rates"

Is this sort of what you're thinking?

Answer 8

Kind of.. Its processed foods and fast foods

Answer 9

Processed and Fast Foods Equal a Faster Death ??

Answer 10

Yeah, I like that. That works to be quite a thought-provoking title.

Answer 11

Alright.. Now my last problem is my requirements say "include data tables, graphs and/or illustrations as appropriate".. Im not entirely sure what images I should include

Answer 12

Ive never had a research paper that allowed you to add images to it. Except an art paper

Answer 13

I used information off of these websites and thought I could use the images they have:

https://www.hsph.harvard.edu/obesity-prevention-source/us-obesity-trends-map/
http://www.businessinsider.com/the-first-mcdonalds-burger-stand-2014-9
https://www.cdc.gov/obesity/data/adult.html

Answer 14

You can insert the images either above or below the correlating paragraph. Usually the image is inserted below the correlating paragraph.

Answer 15

Oh. I was going to line it up with the sentence it goes along with on the side and have the text merge with it.. Do I have to do it above or below the paragraph?

Answer 16

Yeah, that would work as well.

Answer 17

Okay. Thank you! I guess ill start looking for images to include

Answer 18

You're welcome! Let me know if you need me to help you with anything else. :)

Answer 19

How does this look?

Answer 20

@Irrati0nal

Answer 21

It looks good, but don't forget to add the sources for your images below each image (for the images that don't have the source labeled on them already).