My intention isn't perfectionism, but rather to give you a reminder.
PASS THE POTATOS PLEASE Mind your manners in a timely manner All ye who come aboard the table For on this day of thanks it is time to be thankful for somebody else. So ever in attitude dress thyself with gratitude from the eat to drink; yet to happy and grieve For nothing isn't till everything is a believe in which a day is pronounced grateful. Though the reigns of rain may pour subtle pain Doubt thou who undermines sunny earthquakes Weight upon palms break loose; it is by thanks you may smile again. It is with earnest in truth from furthest that what has been given we've taken Whatever not ours It's only started for awaken that every blessing is blessed.
This is the reminder, that though it was Thanksgiving, it does not mean that we are to be thankful once a year because of a holiday, but rather every single 24/7 chance we get. Even in chaotic times. I am plenty guilty myself of not being thankful enough because natural human nature implants selfish-ness in our very veins till we let it take over our lives. Some parts of this poem have a few rough edges, but I cannot apologize for the meaning. Feel free to jot any thoughts or critiques down! ^.^
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