Question

THROWBACK TIME, FEEDBACK IS WELCOME MY FRIENDS

One day I said hi, will you come my way, she returned with aye, I have a busy day, i said good bye, and she walked away, then i ate a pie, thinking about radioactive decay, the pie was dry, but I ate it anyway, hope she gave me a lie, since it is a friday, had a chicken thigh, it slid down my airway, the next day i gave a battle cry, and went after my prey, I had to clarify, wether to my joy or dismay, so with a cabbage butterfly I rose to the sky, flying away over monterey, I’m a soft and nice guy, so i held a giveaway, i gave away my magpie, and my manta ray, at last i caught the spy, before slipping away, he worked for the love of my life, even on an underpay, I found that she loved I, so I bought a bouquet, i gave a loud sigh, and asked for action replay, as we near the end of the of the rhyme supply, i give you some vitamin k.

Answer 1

that is awsome

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Wow Ilovepuppies haha made me smile LOL it reminds me of some particular person xP

Answer 4

remember the original post i made for this??? @ShadowLegendX hanako even sang it and recorded it

Answer 5

this is beautiful

Answer 6

"i give you some vitamin k." THATS MY FAV PART

Answer 7

was running out of rhymes @breanna.rae

Answer 8

first line got me

Answer 9

rejected after 5 seconds @ShadowLegendX

Answer 10

rip, kri everi tyme

Answer 11

This pome made my day omf

Answer 12

pome <3333 @breanna.rae

Answer 13

omg i spelt it wrong kms

Answer 14

check math chat guys xD