Dear time, death, and love:

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hope210 · Answer

Love, you have betrayed me,
                                                                hurt me
                                                       and left me all alone;
                                                   Time, you have taunted me,
                                                     played tricks on my mind,
                                                       you never give me enough,
                                                      and that makes life tough;
                                                          Death, you haunt me,
                                                       follow me where ever I go,
                                                 whether its a few steps down the road
                                                   or a thousand miles from home

hope210 · Answer

@Atsie @YoungStudier

atsie · Answer

This is kinda like an ode to love and time and death all at the same time. It's very realistic. I like it ^.^

youngstudier · Answer

I LURVE IT OMG *~*

xxerica_fireheartxx · Answer

O.. M.. F... G!!! did you write it yourself? i am a poet myself and your poem makes so much sense unbelievable you have got a talent

hope210 · Answer

@XxErica_FireheartxX Thank you and yes I wrote it

kittiwitti1 · Answer

The umbrage in dogged pursuit,
the Valley shadow will our lives uproot

a relentless hound in harried chase,
round and round this endless race;$$\color{crimson}{till~we~finally~succumb~to~this~bitter~embrace}$$

kittiwitti1 · Answer

Nice job on your poem!