Question

MLA format?

Answer 1

Is this In MLA format?

Answer 2

8 December 2016
no comma

Answer 3

I know the paper was pretty redundant, I was in a rush.

Answer 4

do you know how to change space ??

Answer 5

yeah

Answer 6

do you see `paragraph` and there is an arrow next to it (first highlight the whole essay mot including work cited page )
click on that and then vv

Answer 7

are you allowed to use pronouns ?

Answer 8

@Jbnewscheck ... There are a lot of grammatical errors... check for fragments, run ons & capitalization errors

Answer 9

It is good that you have introduced the author in your intext citations, this needs to be followed by a page number. (pg number). <-- period.

This is true for all of your citations. You need to included page numbers in your works cited source.

Answer 10

easybib.org
this is a great website that will give you free citations in MLA format. I would double check the format of your citations in your works cited page. just to be sure...

Answer 11

Thanks, I appreciate it I'm a freshman and still learning.

Answer 12

no worries! i think its great what you have so far but your writing style can be improved ...
try to consider the audience -->
your professor will be reading this. the purpose of this paper i assume is to inform him on the research that you have done regarding the sports teams you have researched.
the voice of your paper shouldn't be from a first paper perspective. maybe try writing in 3rd person passive ?

Answer 13

I agree, much revision is needed.

Answer 14

Can you believe I dished this out in an hour?

Answer 15

Well I can because it's not that great lol

Answer 16

@Jbnewscheck
If you ever do plan to go to college in the future, a lot of the courses require you to be good at "on demand" writing. I wish I was a better writer when I was in 9th grade haha...

Just try and practice and think about literary devices you can use to help strengthen your paper. If you have time, it isn't a bad idea to have your teacher look it over and ask for their feedback.

Answer 17

@sunnnystrong Yeah I agree, it's just tough trying to get accustom to this environment. I used to be home schooled.