Question

My First Poem
Can I get some good feedback plz

Answer 1

I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
The first thing I saw from my eye was you.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.

I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 2

nice i like it very good

Answer 3

i like it very interesting As you are reading it its easy to follow along with the story ypu are portraying good job

Answer 4

thanks

Answer 5

np

Answer 6

It's so good! Great job, love.

Answer 7

wow its amazing! you should focus on poetry it seems like you can write

Answer 8

@Yinshy

Answer 9

i have read this one before i i liked it alot