Question

Should I continue with this or no? Feedback please!

Answer 1

Prologue

When you're all alone and there's nothing you can do about it. How you dream of the day where a person walks up to you and says hi. Then you realize that it could never happen because it's only you in the world. Everyone else has died because of selfishness, pride, greed, jealousy, and hoarding. They died of their wicked ways, no way to fix it. My mother said I was special, I didn't believe her. But when the day came she was right everyone everywhere had gone mad and it was their own doom. In the end I was the only one left. Why? Because I never had a normal life I was never jealous, prideful, selfish none of those feelings, those emotions. Actually I never remember having real emotions. Until I found out that I was never real. I was a machine. I was an android.

Thoughts? I don't know if it's good enough to be an actual book or not. I'd consider this a prologue.

Answer 2

hmmm mabe this for a beginning and then its saying some thing along the lines of how this all began or some thing or the machine trying to survive in a lifeless world

Answer 3

with only animals and what not

Answer 4

Thanks, that's a good idea :)

Answer 5

tell me when your done with the story i would like to read it