Question

Need someone to read this over for any mistakes.

Answer 1

"B-but Gabby, what if they dont want a such a young person working for them! I am only 23!" You held onto the phone in your hand like it was your life line. A booming voice came from the other end of the phone " Oh come on! dont think like that and i know they have hired younger then you before. All you have to do is walk up into that building, shoulders strait head held high and ask for that job!" you almost dropped your phone from how loud her voice got in just that moment. You didn't like hanging around people how talked loud, it hurt your ears. How did you even become friends with Gabby? It was hard to even remember how the two of you became friends, you where quite and shy to people and Gabby was hyper and bold it made no seance i your mind. But how you two became friends would be a story for later. You shackle put the phone back up to your ear and started saying "O-Ok! i will go but if i dont get this job i swear i will kill yo-!!" before you could get the last word out Gabby yelled back " You will get it! Just get to the building ASAP! bye love~" and she hung up before you could even say bye back.

This was not going to be fun.

You sighed as you looked at the clock on your phone, 9:25AM your interview was at 12:25 that left you 3 hours to get ready. You got up from your couch and screed around your small apartment making sure it was nice and tide before you got dressed and ready to leave. It was a small apartment, one bedroom with a small bathroom, and a living-room that connected to the kitchen. Small but it was cozy and felt like home. You really did like your home clean so it was easy to tidy up quickly only taking around a hour to clean up some dishes in the sink and stuff like that. You smiled at your now nice clean apartment in front of you with still two hours to spare to get ready. Pacing around your closet you looked for something light but nice looking to wear to the job interview. It was really hard but you found a pretty looking F/C blouse and long F/C skirt that fit nice, not to tight and not to loss on your figure. You didn't want to attract to much attention to your self, it was one of the reasons you had wanted this job in the first place. A janitor was the perfect job for you, no one would see you in the background and that would mean no more awkward conversations with strangers.

You smiled at the thought of no prying eyes on you. You just didnt like people, well really you did like people but somehow you would end up in embarrassing yourself in some way.

Snapping out of your thoughts you found your eyes looking at the clock, 11:30AM. Out of the apartment door you flew, you skipped down the long flight of stairs and down to the lobby. You smiled and waved at a small elderly lady that waved at you as you passed her going out of the double set of doors of the apartment building doors. Looking around the somewhat empty street you found your F/C moped scooter sitting in the same spot that you had parked it the day before. You quickly hopped on and grabbed your helmet from the seat compartment and snapped it on. You adjusted your back pack and helmet before taking off for the Nave building.

Answer 2

@BenLindquist

Answer 3

I'm on it

Answer 4

you have some spelling errors, let me check on something else