Question

Game information
Murray vs. Olympus Varsity high school football.
Games date 10/6/17
Score Spartans 7 Titans 49
Spartans scores Q1 0 Q2 0 Q3 7 Q4 0 Final 7
Titans scores Q1 14 Q2 21 Q3 7 Q4 7 Final 49
Spartans hit best part in the game at Q3
Titans hit best part in game at Q2
Murray field

Murray and Olympus hit the Murray football field this Friday. For Olympus High school this was a game to remember as they dominated the Spartans. With a score of 49 this is one for the books.
All of the Olympus high school knew that they would take home the win. One of the JV athletes even said that they knew they would kick butt and bring home the win. The players were more than ready for this game and they showed their hard work during the game with a huge defeating score of 49-7.
Both teams did a great job but with the Titans defense they had no chance and that showed around the second quarter. Though the Spartans got nothing but a single touchdown in quarter three there was no catching up for Murray high.
(Does this look good for a news report in journalism, if not what should I change?)

Answer 1

@SourMunchkin7806

Answer 2

ok just give me a sec to read it

Answer 3

i would put a dash between the sports teams...comma or period, you decide, after 49 and then before "this is one for the books"

Answer 4

besides that it looks great to me

Answer 5

let me know what you get when you turn it in

Answer 6

Thank you and will do :)

Answer 7

homeschooled?

Answer 8

Half and half

Answer 9

oh cool i got a friend who does that

Answer 10

I got a 100 ty sour