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You Ignorant Swine, I do this all the Time, You think your so fine, Thinking you can be mine, But i walk in a straight line, And you be paying a fine, Thinking you could be mine, But i do this all the time, You think you are so fine, But in reality you can't be mine.

Answer 1

@lexxii @Bearclaws72 @theDeviliscoming @ThisGirlPretty @Ultrilliam @Vocaloid @NelsonTA @Elsa213 Rate it please

Answer 2

I've already read this and said it was good :)

Answer 3

Why is this in QuestionCove Feedback?

Answer 4

I believe this should be posted on Writing.
It is decent though.
9-10

Answer 5

because i want feedback

Answer 6

Moved to Writing

Answer 7

QuestionCove Feedback is about giving feedback about QuestionCove.

And looks like we both moved it voca lol

Answer 8

ohh okay

Answer 9

@JustSaiyan

Answer 10

rip 2 ppl gave feedback

Answer 11

*thumbs up*

Answer 12

Yay

Answer 13

@Allison

Answer 14

You ignorant swine, I do this all the time, you think you're so fine, thinking you can be mine. But I walk in a straight line, and you be paying a fine, thinking you could be mine, but I do this all the time, you think you're so fine, but in reality you can't be mine.


Just grammar Nazi-ed it. xD

Answer 15

But it's good. :3 Well done.

Answer 16

oh ;-;

Answer 17

I gave you a star. I loved it c: 10/10.

Answer 18

Yay