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Negrita07:

In no fewer than three sentences, critique the following paragraph. Explain where it could be improved. Then, in your own words, rewrite the paragraph to make its writing stronger. Make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and a topic sentence. Use correct spelling and grammar. Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening offers more than a way for kids to have fun. There are many things to gain from working with plants outside. It is unfortunate that many people feel too busy to garden. More people should take a chance with gardening to see what they can create. I am glad I learned to grow plants when I was a kid.

umm:

@Allison

Negrita07:

can u please help me?

umm:

I tagged Allison, she's a grammar fixer :)

Negrita07:

she is offline

Ultrilliam:

@Elsa213

Negrita07:

im at school and they block almost everything and the internet here is stupid -_-

Ultrilliam:

Welcome to QC BTW!

Ultrilliam:

Don't forget to verify your email address to unlock QCs full range of features! (the email will most likely be in spam)

Allison:

Grammar Queen is here. :D

Allison:

Your original: Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening offers more than a way for kids to have fun. There are many things to gain from working with plants outside. It is unfortunate that many people feel too busy to garden. More people should take a chance with gardening to see what they can create. I am glad I learned to grow plants when I was a kid. Rewriting it: I am glad I learned how to grow plants when I was a kid. Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening offers more than a way for kids to have fun. There are many things to gain from working with plants outside. It is unfortunate that many people feel too busy to garden. Gardening is a great exercise, specially for those who suffer from mental health, it helps relax the brain. More people should take a chance with gardening to help not just nature, but themselves too.

Allison:

How's dat ~o~

Ultrilliam:

@Negrita07 ran away... I think they got tired of waiting x.x

Elsa213:

Watching flowers grow is one of my happiest childhood memories. Gardening helps not only children but adults have fun in the most educational way. Gardening helps you understand the process of fruits and vegetables like knowing how long it takes a fruit or vegetable to grow. While watching your foods grow, you could be more secure and know how your food was treated. It is unfortunate that many people have convinced themselves by believing they are too busy to garden. The privileges of having your own garden: you know if chemicals were injected in your food, gardens can help decorate your house and apartment, and plants help with health and can be used for medical purposes. In my opinion, people should spend more time gardening and be proud of what they created. It is an easy task. All it requires is a seed or root, fertile, and water. By planting, we are making the world a better and healthier place.

Negrita07:

thank you so much

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