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(Chapter one run) i was on my way to my house when i see a static phase hit me. i was wondering what it was. it was slender. Slender was a tall mythical creature. with no face just armes and tentacles . He asked me are u alone boy. I said no and i ran fast but each time i stoped to breath there he was infront of me. I was wondering how to defeat slender and then i seen a note along side slender. I took the note and he said," ahhhh." I was like oh thats how u defeat him. 2 hours later i found 7/8 pages he was really mad i couldent find the last note. Till i saw a little girl. so i seen a little girl and she turned around. it wasnt a little girl when i got up closer. it was me when i was younger. and i had a knife with me. and i threw it at him. then out of no where jeff the killer comes out and picks up the knife. it was his knife. and i ran. and slender was still following me. So i found the last note it was in a cave. i thought this was a dream. so i punched myself in the jaw. no it was not a dream but jeff and i watched slender die v3ry slowly. then he flew in the sky with no more trace of him. End of chapter one chapter two

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Rate how good this story is 1-5

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@dude @Bearclaws72 @ThisGirlPretty @Ultrilliam @Shadow @563blackghost

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Chapter 2 coming soon

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Sorry bad grammar

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Plz rate when finished

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@Allison

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Dude Allison is not on here

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Yea, but whenever she gets on. Whoa that grammar tho x.x

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Oh XD

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BBC it hey how would u rate this without grammar?

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I like it, though who is your intended audience?

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Idk

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Never thought about it

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Uh question what is a intended audience

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The type of people something is intended for, say kids, or adults.


say tech enthusiasts or not ETC

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Adults and teens

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"I was on my way to my house when I see a static phase hit me. I was wondering what it was; it was slender. Slender was a tall mythical creature, with no face, just arms, and tentacles. He asked me "Are you alone, boy?" I said "No" and ran fast, but each time I stopped to breathe, there he was in front of me. Wondering how to defeat slender, I then saw a note alongside slender. I took the note as he yelled," Ahhhh!" I was like "Oh that's how you defeat him." Two hours later, I found 7/8 pages, he was really mad. However, I couldn't find the last note. Searching for the last note, I saw a little girl. As I walked towards the little girl, she turned around. I then realized it wasn't a little girl. It was me when I was younger. The younger version had a knife and I threw it at him. Then out of nowhere, Jeff, the killer comes out and picks up the knife. It was his knife. I ran faster than ever realizing, Slender was still following me. Suddenly, I found the last note hidden in a cave. I thought this was a dream and I punched myself in the jaw. No, it was not a dream. Jeff and I watched Slender die very slowly. As he flew in the sky with no more trace of him."

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Hai there! ^.^
In my opinion, you should add more detail to the story. o:
Explain how and why Slender died, what was written in the notes, what do the characters look like, introduce the setting, etc.

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Whoa Elsa, you edited the whole thing? x.x
^^I agree

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I deed. o;

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Sorry no can do my foot is fractured and im really hurt so if i move a mustle exept for my armes and hands ill have to to be put down

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It was a dark and quiet night; the wind was howling, the trees were knocking on the house windows. I was on my way home when suddenly a static phase hit me. I was wondering what it was; it was Slender.”Who is Slender?” you may ask yourself. You would imagine a tall, muscular man who walks around a park with a sludge hammer, but no. Slender was a tall mythical creature, with no face, just arms, and tentacles. He asked me "Are you alone, boy?" I immediately answer "No" and rushed, but each time I paused to breathe, he was standing in front of me. Worried yet curious how to defeat Slender, My eyes then caught a note that shined alongside him. I snatched the note as he yelled," Ahhhh!" I then ran home with no stops or pauses. Finally, I reached home and locked the doors. I quickly took a peek out the window to find out Slender had followed me home. Trembling, I decided to read the note. “Reminder: Be home before morning. Avoid light.” After two full hours, I came up with a plan. I took one last peek out the window understanding if the plan fails, this could be my last day on Earth, my last day with life. I snuck through the back door and climbed over the fence, making my way through the neighbor's dogs and rushing to find a light. ( I know what you're thinking, “Wouldn't it be easier to get a lighter and set Slender on fire?” Well, my parents never allowed me to touch a lighter, see a lighter, not even hear about a lighter.) After endlessly searching for the brightest light in the neighborhood, I stumbled upon a little girl. Trying my best to ignore the little girl, she turned around. I then realized it wasn't a little girl. It was me when I was younger. The younger version had a knife and threw it at a nearby tree. Then out of nowhere, Jeff, the killer with the widest grin I've ever seen during my human years, yanks the knife off the tree and walks towards my direction. Could it be his knife? I ran faster than ever realizing, Slender was still following me. I ran into a strange, freezing cold cave, trying to hide. At first, I thought this was a nightmare and threw a fist at my jaw. Well, it wasn't a nightmare. Once again, Jeff and Slender spotted me. However, the sun was coming out. I immediately thought “If Slender doesn't die by now, this will be the end for me.” In minutes, Slender laid and squirmed upon the pavement soon to leave no trace at all of his existence. “One gone, one more to go.”

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Omg the note did not say that it said reminder slender man is immortal nothing can kill him exept for a sword buried under the ground 400ft

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Anyways chapter 2 hide or die so after slender disappeared i was standing face-to-face with jeff the killer. If your wondering what jeff looks like he wears a grey hoodie has a white painted face with red lipstick around his lips. When he licked his knife and cut his tongue in half i fainted. I was out for about an hour when he cuts my cheek. He said", why don't we play a little bit of Hide and Seek", ",if u win u keep my knife u lose you die". I gulped in fear trying not to cry. But a tear ran down the left side of my cheek. So i got up and said to jeff the killer", eat my shorts". He looked at me puzzled. And then i hear something. something i never heard before. It was a sound jeff never heard but whatever it was he didnt like it. So he started counting. I thought to my self if i hide in a trash can it would be too obvious. If i hide in the tree he could find me. But if i hide in a.... Wait i forgot i have one power i never told u about. I have the power to morph into anything. So i morphed into a tree by my house. I stood there for 7 hours and then i hear the words", i give up where are u hiding at"!!! So i unmorph from a tree and stand on my front door step. Jeff the killer sees me and asks me", where where u?" I told him i was right here he said", bull crap u where not here the whole time", then i go to the same spot i was hising and morphed into a tree agian. His mind was blown. And he gave me his knife in return. I thru it at him and he dissapeared the end chapter 3 coming soon

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Edit this please theres 7 chapters coming up

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@Bearclaws72