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Chapter One

    My name is Lina D!ckson. I was born on April 27th, 2000. I was an only child for some time but then my mom had my baby brother Joshuah on December 4th in 2004. He’s a cutie. Anyways, I live in a small town in Ohio called Upper Sandusky. Its small but I love it. I have a lot of friends in the high school but there are some who are very dislikable. They tend to bully and sulk about how their lives aren’t the best and how their parents don’t pay attention to them. It’s understandable but not understandable when they put others down for their benefit. And there is this one guy that is just different from everyone else. His name is Drake Parker. He’s really different in many ways. He’s no average boy at this average school. There’s something about him that just hits me in a way that makes me fall for him more and more. He acts like my best friend and he’s just like me. I can’t explain it but he’s like my twin and we were separated at birth but I love it. He gives me this look of desire that i can’t hide from. He has this blonde hair that is always perfect, even when messy. His eyes, deep blue pools of passion, stare into mine when we talk. He compell’s me. Like a drug. I can’t stay away. I always tend to find a way to him when we are at school, even when we don’t have many classes together. I don’t see why the others keep warning me about him. They say that he’s creepy and just plain rude. I honestly don’t see that in him. He did get into a fight once. This popular guy named Jackson Peterson tried to grab me but then Drake had a tendency to slam him against his locker and threaten him. Drake was in Juvie for 3 days for that. I honestly don’t know why. People always seem to overreact to things like this. But thats when this all started.

    “Hey there Lina. You look sad today. What’s wrong?” said Zoey. I shrugged my shoulders and stood in silence. I couldn’t say anything. My depression kept my mouth shut. No words to describe my problems. “Do you need to talk to me? Look I’m your best friend. Please tell me what’s wrong.” Zoey said grievously. Suddenly, I shook my head and look at her with this angry look in my eyes, “I’m fine! Just don’t talk to me right now. I need silence with you okay? I just don’t honestly know why I’m like this right now…”Zoey takes my hand and squeezes it softly and rubs the top of my hand with her thumb “I’m sorry Lina. I didn’t mean to make you mad. I’m just trying to help you out.” What was wrong with me? My brain

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doesn’t know weather to grieve or to let everything out at once. Most people wouldn’t understand. My only problem is, is I’m different. Not telling anyone this is very important. I can’t tell anyone that I’m in love with Drake Parker. They would look at me like I’m crazy and put me in a Mental hospital. “I’m sorry. Just so much thinking going on right now. I didn’t mean to snap at you.” I say as I let my hand sit there. And this. This is only the beginning.

       This morning would be a struggle. To get up in the morning, take a shower and get dressed. I get to see him today. What will happen? Will he kiss me? Will he hug me? Or will he walk away from me this time? I’m so nervous but I need to be strong. I need to tell him how I feel today. I can’t hide anymore. It’s been so long and now I have to do it. Well, here I go. Going to school today will be a pain. I walk up to my car and slowly get in. hesitation to start driving but I turn the keep and put the car in drive and i slowly drive of to school. My head is full of all these thoughts that keep hitting my soul. My hands are shaking on the steering wheel. It’s going to be hard but I’ll do it. I get out of the car and lock it as i get to school. He should be here but I don’t see him. Maybe he’s already in school? I don’t even see his car. This is strange. Maybe I’ll call him. But I also don’t wanna seem desperate. No, i don’t wanna seem like that kind of girl to know where he’s at all the time. I’ll just go to class. I walk inside the school and walk to my locker to put my stuff away. I slowly walk to class and look around to see for him in class but I don’t see him. Maybe he’s sick? I honestly don’t understand. Drake NEVER misses a day. This day is getting weirder and weirder but i won’t worry so much about it. I sit down and I get out my history books and my notes for the quiz today. I grab my pencil that Drake gave me as my teacher gives me my quiz and I get ready to dive in. I breath in and out slowly to calm my nerves for today and I stretch to relax my muscles and to give myself some room. As soon as I start my quiz, my palms start to sweat, my heartbeat races all of a sudden and I look up and Drake is running into class. “So sorry I’m late. My truck broke down and I’m here now” says Drake as he sits down beside me. He grabs his pencil and starts on his quiz along with the rest of us. My palms started to sweat even more and I could take it. I might as well have been in front of the class doing a presentation. I look over at him and smile with a warm blush on my face. I just gotta tell him when this quiz is done. If I don’t I will regret it. After answering every question I get up and turn it in to my teacher and I walk out with Drake after the bell rings. “Hey Drake? I really have to tell you something.” I say with a slight blush as I mess with my hands. “Sure, whats up?” He slowly wrapped his arm around me and I blush even more. “W-well, I-I like you a lot.” I look up at him in shock as to his reaction.

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It's good, but the first sentence made me hungry.

Answer 3

try it now?


66;

Answer 4

oof

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Ooo horny

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Omg x'D

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XD

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I support u

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Thank you :P

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no problem any time aight

Answer 11

I have a lot of the same issues

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This is a good way to express my feelings x3

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ಠ_ಠ Good enough.

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@Ultrilliam

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yes wattpad

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @vaporeon246
i'm not trying to be rude or anything but @tigerlover you've used a word incorrectly " My brain doesn’t know weather to grieve or to let everything out at once. Most people wouldn’t understand. "

weather is supposed to be whether

But other than that your story is REALLY good
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I'll fix it :/ You could of just DM'ed me and saved me the embarrassment

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hey @tigerlover i enjoy your story a lot i'm one of the big writers on this website so if you need any help with the story let me know and ill try to help when i can and also you have a few things that need grammar checking for example: "I shook my head and look at her with this angry look in my eyes," the first look should have been looked