Question

Truth be told,
It was a silent room filled with things of old,
Her eyes so bright from the moons gleam,
As she ducked her head from a broken beam,
Silent and quick steps she leaves the room and steps outside,
She's never been alone or away from anyone before; so her palms grew sweaty and her stomach went on a roller coaster ride,
So she jogs to the nearest stream while she runs her hands through it, it was icy cold,
More colder than silver or gold,
It was a still and silent except a few ribbits from a nearby frog,
Also faint barks from her Grandmothers dog,
Walking further away from her Grandmothers mansion the air becomes like fog,
And in the distance you could hear a squealing hog,
At last she finally felt free from all her Grandmothers stern demands,
Even her yelling at her eldest brother to become a young man...

To be continued...

Answer 1

I love it

Answer 2

Thank you. ^.^

Answer 3

Lol xD

Answer 4

You're welcome ^_^ lol

Answer 5

Well written, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Answer 6

Thank you Shadow!

Answer 7

*medals shadow*

Answer 8

Gg

Answer 9

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Answer 10

hey @umm "more colder" aint a thing so you might wanna correct it

Answer 11

I have, lol. That's also why it said "to be continued"

Answer 12

a few other things need to be revised but otherwise i enjoy reading this please continue

Answer 13

Thank you..sorry got busy.