Question

Take me back to when I was young
Take me back to when i was dumb
back to when i did not know much at all
and it did not hurt so much to fall
take me back to the good times
before i started wrighting down these rhymes
back to when everything was simple
and nothing drove you mentle
Take me back to when no one pointed out your faults
Take me back to when we did not lock emotions in vaults
Back to when there was not much bad
and it did not matter what we had
before we did not have to worrie about money
and life was sweet as honey
id do anything to go back
just to try to get my life back on track

Answer 1

Did you write this?

Answer 2

<3 Beautiful Poem Kyle i knew u had it in you i knew there was something inside u that could make u make such a beautiful poem <3 *applause* WOOOOHOOOO

Answer 3

I wrote this yesterday night

Answer 4

Its' really good. You should take up song writing. <3

Answer 5

Shanks and i might XD i have 25 poems and like 10 are good

Answer 6

i have 2 or 3 that are song like

Answer 7

i have 2 or 3 that are song like

Answer 8

Nice job Kyle. It sounds great from my perspective. Keep up with the good work.