Question

My Favorite Poem

Answer 1

I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
The first thing I saw from my eye was you.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
Since then I realized you'll love me despite
of any trouble that comes in your way.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
With you telling me every morning it was all right.
Taking care of me whole day, while you’re at work.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
Since then our love have taken deep flight.
so high like a rocket reaching towards the sky.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
I remember the first time you taught me to write.
Taking care of me while you are working whole day.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.
You treating me like the flying kite,
Generous, kind and not getting angry for what I do.
I was born in your hand, holding me tight.
Bringing me home safely from that scary night.

Answer 2

if you have read this already then oh well idc

Answer 3

Sounds like a song tbh

Answer 4

been try to turn it into a song and lurn how to play it on my guitar

Answer 5

Thats great.......Maybe i could sing it and you can play it?

Answer 6

that would be cool

Answer 7

My channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCyN-h1qHruWaioqIkVSWIeA
try using a beat hah

Answer 8

Yeah even though i dont really sing good

Answer 9

hmmmm you guys got some ideas you 2 wanna help out with this and make it a complete song?

Answer 10

you should actually make it a song

Answer 11

i really want to but i cant think of anymore words
i will need help finishing it

Answer 12

I cant think of any lyrics for it either Dal

Answer 13

I think it'd be better as a rap than a song

Answer 14

we need to think about it okay cause if we can do this it would be awesome

Answer 15

ya

Answer 16

Yep

Answer 17

use like rhymebuster or something lmao

Answer 18

maybe but idk about the whole rap thing might sound better being sung

Answer 19

We can try both

Answer 20

I agree with the other users that you should continue making this a full fledged song. It has a nice rhythm that made it soothing to read.

Answer 21

yea then post what sounds best

Answer 22

guys i would love to do this cause i have always loved music but been to word shy to write a song

Answer 23

I love music as well, Ive been in choir for about 2 1/2 years, And ive been told that ive got either a good voice or that i need to shut my mouth that i sound bad. Ive always wanted to write a song as well but there has been so much thats been going on to me that its been hard.

Answer 24

I play drums for a year and a half and sing in choir for around a year and a half too

Answer 25

well i wrote this a few years ago
so idk how well imma do with this but yea i will take all the help i can get for this song in progress imma start a new tab in music okay

Answer 26

we are gonna start working asap

Answer 27

Alright

Answer 28

@Felicity96 @SkyVoltage43 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5S9pBFH_YA
well, the rap version works pretty well, but i think it is more beautiful sung as a song, but thats gonna be harder lol

Answer 29

is that my song???????

Answer 30

in that link i cant tell cause its blocked for me on youtube

Answer 31

Oh, no its not your song, its just a beat i used to try it out

Answer 32

Im not gonna post your song anywhere

Answer 33

ok

Answer 34

@skyvoltage43 I like that poem is beautiful

Answer 35

that so is sooooo good

Answer 36

hello????

Answer 37

anyone??? there??

Answer 38

GOODDDDD 111111111111111111100000000000000/10

Answer 39

I love it and for me I can feel as if it was I was a child and my mom is my everything. That's what I got from the poem. If I is interrupted it, then I am sorry, but I do love it.

Answer 40

now its my favorite lol