Question

A Dr. Suess inspired poem I wrote (Please give opinions!)

Answer 1

It's really dumb so beware

Welcome to the land of Flockylattuel,
This is the land of the laughing gull.
Lily Littles will tell you the same,
And if you're lucky they will even tell you their name.
Fockylings roam the street,
Walking on their three back feet.
Tocfee in each one's hands,
The best drink in all the lands.
What is Tocfee you may ask?
Well, it's toffee like coffee you can carry in a flask.
Oooh, look at the shamera in action!
Now, this ladies and gentlemen is an interesting contraption.
This camera will take your picture and do a little dance,
On the streets and cities, they prance.
Now there goes the Ghlumbuil, our mascot in the flesh,
Oh no, Oh no Laughing Gull don't get caught in the mesh!
The Ghlumbuil ducks down quickly, gaining cheers,
And this is music to its ears.

Answer 2

It's A funny but great poem..u have a big Imagination.. I can just tell

Answer 3

Thank you so much.

Answer 4

Thank ur Imagination

Answer 5

I like this o:

Answer 6

@AngeI Thank ya

Answer 7

The poem is Great. Funny Also.