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is this good i had to wite a childrens store for creative writting and idk if its okay

Mama Bear’s Little Cubs
Written By: Sadie Carstater

On a bright and sunny morning two little cubs wanted to play with their mama bear in the woods.
“ Wake up mama! wake up! We want to play mama!” The cubs said while jumping on their mama bear.
“ Let me sleep my little ones.” their mama bear said.
“But Mama w e want to play mama! Please get up mama!” The cubs said.
“ Ugh! Fine we can play just one game of tag, and only one.” Their mama bear said.
“ Okay mama.” The two cubs said sadly.
“ One, two, three! You guys better run, or I’m going to get you!.” Their mama bear said.
The two cubs started to run as fast as they could.
“ You can’t get us mama, you're too slow.” The cubs said.
“ Oh, I bet I can.” Their mama bear said.
The cubs started to run faster and faster, so their mama bear couldn’t tag them.
“ You will never catch up mama!” The cubs said.
“ Oh really, I’ll never catch up.” Their mama bear said under her breath right behind them.
“Ahh!” the cubs said while running faster.
The cubs mama bear started to run faster and tagged her little cubs.
“ Mama you tagged us.” The cubs said sadly.
“ Yeah you bet I did! I am tired; now I am going to lay down underneath the tree where there is shade.” Their mama bear said, pointing to the tree.
“ But mama! It’s fun playing tag with you. Please don’t go lay down underneath the tree where there is shade Mama! Let's play one more game, mama!” the cubs said while following their mama bear to a tree where there is shade.
“ No mama is tired, why don’t you two play tag with each other.” Their mama bear said.
“Okay mama.” the cubs said.
“ You’re it.” the boy cub said.
“ No you’re it!” the girl cub said.
“ Fine I will be it.” the boy cub said.
The cubs walk out more into the woods, while looking at their Mama bear with sad eyes.
“ Actually, do you want to play hide and seek, I love to play hide and seek.” the boy cub said.
“ Yeah let’s play hide and seek.” the girl cub said.
“ Who is it?” the boy cub asked.
“ You of course, you're the one that wanted to play hide and seek.” the girl cub said.
“ Okay go hide, ready set go!” the boy cub said.
The other cub runs really fast not far from the other bear, and hides behind a bush with berries.
“ Oh berries, I love berries!” the girl cub said to herself; while picking them and eating them.
“One, two, three, four, five, six…
The boy cub got distracted by a bird, and wanted to chase it. So th

Answer 1

e cub stopped counting and quietly snuck up on the bird.
“Rar,Rar!” the boy cub said.
“ Ahh! Leave me alone little one!” the bird said.
“ No,I want to chase you,you are a bird,and I love chasing birds.” the boy cub said to the bird.
“ Ok,little cub, I will let you chase me,but you have to give me a head stat, I have little legs.” the bird said.
The cub that was counting,but stopped because he wanted to chase a bird waited till the bird was half away from him,and ran after the bird.
“You weren't kidding about having little legs.” the boy cub said right behind the bird.
The bird tried to run faster,but his legs wouldn’t go any faster than what he was going. So the bird just gave up,and flew off into the sky.
“ You can never catch me now little cub!” the bird said.
“ Yeah I can if I run,and jump into the sky.” the boy cub said.
Even though it’s not possible for the cub to run ,and jump into the sky.He did,he kept trying,and trying,until he knew for sure that, he could not run,and try to jump up in the sky.
“ You are such a silly cub.” the bird said while laughing as he was flying down from the sky,and landed next to the cub.
“So, can I still chase you?” the boy cub asked the bird.
The cub forgot that he was suppose to play hide,and seek with the other cub. He didn’t know that the other cub was right behind him behind a bush with berries. The girl cub jumped out behind the bush.
“Ahh!” said the boy cub and the bird.
“ Why didn’t you come and find me?” the girl cub asked.
“ I saw a bird,so I stopped counting.” the boy cub said.
“ And he chased me.” the bird said.
“ You made me wait forever, so that you could chase a bird.” the cub that was hiding said.
“ Yep.” the boy cub said.
“And it was fun,but my little legs couldn’t take it anymore.” the bird said.
“ How rude!” the girl cub said.
“ Oh look berries!,do you want berries sis,I will pick them off the bush for you.” the boy cub said.
“ No, I do not want berries, I just had berries,while you were to busy chasing the bird!” the girl cub said angrily.
“ Hey let’s be nice to each other now,how about we play chase the bird.” the boy cub said.
“ Hey! Not fair, there is two of you,and only one of me.” the bird said.
“ It will be fun!” both of the cubs said.
“ All right,All right you two can chase me.” the bird said.
“ Ready set go!” both of the cubs said.
The bird started to run really fast,almost fast enough that the cubs could not keep up. Eventually the cubs got tired,so they just gave up,and laid on the ground. The bird looked back,and noticed the cubs had stopped running,so the bird flew back to the cubs.
“ Why aren’t you two little ones chasing me?” the bird asked.
“ I am really tired.” the boy cub said.
“ My legs hurt.” the girl cub said.
“ We are going to go back to our mama bear,and go to sleep.” both of the cubs said.

Answer 2

“ Ok bye, it was fun playing with you two.” the bird said while flying up into the sky.
The cubs watched the bird fly in into the sky until he was out of sight.Then the slowly walked back to their mama bear right where she was underneath a tree where there is shade sleeping. The cubs quietly snuggled up into her arms,and went to sleep.

Answer 3

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