Chapter ( Reinhardt Rap)
(Verse Reinhardt ) Birthed in Echienwald Strength of five thousand Live or die hard Reinhardt gripping the hammer like talons The scattered mess should be a felon Drop you on the beat Drop you like a beat The beatdown given betrays my age Old man full of rage A rhino out the cage You shall not pass This that Nyan Cat whoopin Days before social media Ay that hammer goes up That hammer comes down Slam em around Proud of the sound Poundin every miserable bone Vicious an i'll prove it Pimp slap you into the universe But first its your crew I flatten into the Earth Cruising when im crushing foes through dirt Barrier shielding heavy armory warhammer carrier That hammer comes up That hammer comes down HOPE YOU CAN BARE THE PAIN (Chorus) Enlarged intimidating An artifact in armor determined German made to terminate Smash every collum in your vertibrae Your all rats and im the exterminator My Hammer is a pen so ends the chapter of your life (Verse 2 Reinhardt ) Birthed in Echienwald Son i'll stampede you With the force of five horses I'll expose more than innards When I show you can't react To basic attacks fazed like you got God smacked Hear that stompin you know any advance is God forsaken Now a God is speakin its time to dispel judgement My shield like a spell summoned from the guantlant Dauntless only emotion I show is the smirk From murking you with locomotion Frieght train who's loco INFANTRY DISMANTLED FROM THE BATTERING RAM Sure you dont want to reverse from the splattering I turn the battleground a splash zone Son I'll spit bars line for line one time for one time God of Death like Freya God tier slayer A God who will make it over quick watch You aren't in the presence of a God anymore I'm a present day Shinigami (Chorus) Enlarged intimidating An artifact in armor determined German made to terminate Smash every collum in your vertibrae Your all rats and im the exterminator My Hammer is a pen so ends the chapter of your life
The poem lady is here to review
The chorus is amazing. You still need to work on the other parts of rhyming and your rhyming scheme, I am saying this because most raps are in couplet or traditional form, since raping is a type of poem
I didn't know you played overwatch and the rapping is two different styles in both verse Thats why the scheme is off
Oh okayy
One is more informative the other is more aggressive and hostile
Whats with all this standing around, There is Glory to be won
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