Elsha
I need english helps please
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"When I Was Fair and Young" by Queen Elizabeth I circa 1585 When I was fair and young, then favor graced me. Of many was I sought their mistriss for to be, But I did scorn them all and answered them therefore: Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more. How many weeping eyes I made to pine in woe, How many sighing hearts I have not skill to show, But I the prouder grew and still this spake therefore: Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more. Then spake fair Venus' son, that brave victorious boy, Saying: You dainty dame, for that you be so coy, I will so pluck your plumes as you shall say no more: Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more. As soon as he had said, such change grew in my breast That neither night nor day I could take any rest. Wherefore I did repent that I had said before: Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more.
The last poem is still stuck in my head. e.e
We need to read this and find the tones
and there are questions we need to answer
2. List at least three examples of diction in the text that add to the overall tone. Explain how each word contributes to the emotional power of the piece. 1. Scorn: Meaning to hate or yell at someone 2. 3.
^first question
What is the tone you see in this poem?
well she uses the word Scorn and it means to hate someone or yell at someone so im thinking anger or Annoying bc she says Importune meaning Beg
thats all i can get out of it
She didn't want him begging her anymore. ^ Tone of annoyance. `Importune`
`How many weeping eyes I made to pine in woe,` `Woe`
ok so i was correct with the annoyance but wouldnt Scorn be one to cause it means hate someone
2. List at least three examples of diction in the text that add to the overall tone. Explain how each word contributes to the emotional power of the piece. 1. Scorn 2.Importune 3.Woe
Scorn could be one of the words.
^^^so this is correct?
Yerp. ^.^
3. List at least three examples of imagery in the text that add to the overall tone. Explain how each description contributes to the emotional power of the piece.
What do you picture when reading the poem?
I picture a castle with a young lady annoyed at people begging on there knees
I picture a beautiful, young queen annoyed by men who beg to marry her.
ok thats one example
A queen who shows no interest in getting married.
3. List at least three examples of imagery in the text that add to the overall tone. Explain how each description contributes to the emotional power of the piece. 1. I Picture a beautiful Queen annoyed by Men asking for her hand in marriage 2. A Queen that hates men that ask for her hand in marriage when she knows they just want her money? 3.
1 and 2 are almost similar, though. e.e
However, the poem doesn't mention the men were interested in her money.
ok then what do i do for 2 " i picture a queen standing infront of the men yelling at them to leave her alone"
An annoyed queen who wants everyone to quit begging.
1. An annoyed queen who wants everyone to quit begging. 2. A queen who shows no interest in getting married. 3. A restless woman regretting her words. (Ending Stanza)
3. List at least three examples of imagery in the text that add to the overall tone. Explain how each description contributes to the emotional power of the piece. 1. I Picture a beautiful Queen annoyed by Men asking for her hand in marriage 2. i picture a queen standing infront of the men yelling at them to leave her alone 3. I picture a queen putting saying no to everyone and making them sad
oh....ok
Queen Elizabeth wasn't even pretty. e.e
4. List the examples of important details the author chose to include. Explain how these details contribute to the emotional power of the piece.
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were are her eyebrows e.e
Rip Eyebrows
4. List the examples of important details the author chose to include. Explain how these details contribute to the emotional power of the piece.
ok were at dis question
How many questions are der? e.e
were at 4 out of 7
Important details the author includes is when hmmmmmm
If im correct the title describes her physical appearance and is trustworthy
thats important detail every person would need to know
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`Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more.` e.e
4. List the examples of important details the author chose to include. Explain how these details contribute to the emotional power of the piece. 1.Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more. this contributes to the emotional power of the piece because the queen is telling the men to go somewhere else and stop begging her for her hand in marriage
Correct. ^.^
How many examples do we need?
it doesnt say a number so i think 1 is ok
``` You dainty dame, for that you be so coy, I will so pluck your plumes as you shall say no more ```
Let's add 2, just to make sure you receive proper credit for the question.
ok
how do those contribute to the emotional power of this
Once Venus' son told her that, she felt powerful regret in her heart.
5. List the examples of important details the author chose to omit. Explain how these missing details contribute to the emotional power of the piece.
so now we need to find examples of details the author left out
How the queen's appearance changed. e.e
it did?
The author left it out. e.e
ok
5. List the examples of important details the author chose to omit. Explain how these missing details contribute to the emotional power of the piece. The Author leaves out the appearance of the queen and how it changed.
^correct
2 more to go
6. Analyze the author’s use of syntax in this text. Are the sentences long or short? Does the author use punctuation to slow down the pace, or short phrases to quicken it? Explain how the sentence structure contributes to the emotional power of the piece.
The author uses short sentences and uses punctuation to slow down the sentences
^am i correct
The author repeats `Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more.`
ok but how does that answer the question? Analyze the author’s use of syntax in this text. Are the sentences long or short? Does the author use punctuation to slow down the pace, or short phrases to quicken it? Explain how the sentence structure contributes to the emotional power of the piece.
i thought the answer would be The author uses short sentences and uses punctuation to slow down the sentences
I agree.
Okie last question
7. Select a tone (or multiple tones) from the list of Tone Words. Explain why this tone is the best way to describe this text.
List of tone words : affectionate agitated ambivalent anxious apathetic apologetic appreciative apprehensive authoritative arrogant bewildered bitter blunt bossy brusque candid casual choleric coarse compassionate conciliatory condescending confident consoling contentious cynical dejected delightful depressed derisive derogatory desperate diabolic disappointed ecstatic effusive empathetic encouraging enthusiastic expectant facetious fatalistic foreboding frantic frightened frustrated gleeful gloomy grave greedy harsh haughty hilarious hollow hopeless humble humorous incisive incredulous indignant introspective instructive ironic jocund joyful lethargic lighthearted loud manipulative melancholy mirthful miserable mocking mournful nervous nostalgic paranoid passive persuasive pleading proud questioning relaxed reticent romantic sarcastic sardonic scared scornful seductive serene serious sinister skeptical solemn soothing stressful surprised suspicious sympathetic tearful tender terse thoughtful timorous uncaring uneasy uninterested unhappy unsympathetic vibrant whimsical wistful zealous
Breh Dat scared meh e.e
x'D
i would say Depressed bc of the ending Scornfull because of the beginning
Is this correct so far^
I'd say `apologetic` because of the ending and `uninterested` at the beginning.
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now why would u put those
I will slap you with salami, Pixel. >.> She regrets rejecting the men which to me it creates an apologetic tone. e.e She seemed uninterested in the men which is why she would say `Go, go, go, seek some other where, importune me no more.`
THX ELSA!!!
Ofc. ^.^ <3 Sorry for taking so long. ;-;
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