Question

This is a rap that I have been working on and please tell me your honest thought of it

Hey man I miss you,
Theres not a day that goes by that I don't think about you,
I wish I could have stopped it but it just happened, So hear me out......

I called your name don't think I didn't I tried to grab you but of freaking course I didn't
I blame myself for your mistake I should have been watching you,
I promised you that I would protect you and love you and let no one hurt you,
But I broke that promise and I'm sorry Rufus, I tried running for you and I called your name but you didn't listen Why didn't you listen you should have freaking listened.......

I'm sorry........ I wish it was me I would have gotten stung by a thousand bees
Only if it meant that I could see your beautiful goofy face.
Everday I think about what happened I tried to figure out a way to stop it but there is no way to stop it.
Oh god what have I done to deserve this, I'm sorry I confess all my sins but I wish it was me instead, Is this a joke or is this a punishment,
I'm sorry for what ever I had done I shouldn't have done it........

But why take my baby from me........
He was my world........
He was my rhythm and my blues........

I want to go back in time and save you Rufus........
I remeber the day like it was yesterday......
I brought you outside and you were being a dufus......
Like always I would play with you and hug you and cherrish you.
Until that very moment that person hit you......
Why weren't you paying attention dude!!!!!!!!!!
I'M GOING TO FREAKING KILL YOU!!!!!!
and as I remember holding you in my arms......
It was the damn hardest thing I had to do.......
I grabed you and picked you up telling you not to give up..........
COME ON STAY WITH ME BUDDY!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE JUST GIVE ME A HUGGY!!!!!!!!!!!
and as I watched you take your last breath you gave me a lick on the face......

As you said your godbyes with one lick I looked at you and said
DON'T FREAKING DO THIS TO ME DUUF!!!!! I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU I LOVE YOU I HOPE YOU KNOW THAT!!!!
as I watched your body become lifeless I cried......
And I looked up and saw you in spirit form....
As I beg you not to go........
You gave me that silly precious look I used to know..........
And I never saw you again......
I love you Rufus and you will never be fogotten<3

Answer 1

Some of the words are censored

Answer 2

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Answer 3

cool nice rap

Answer 4

Yeah its you know what its about?

Answer 5

Bro thats legit awesome!

Answer 6

yea

Answer 7

...............ocool

Answer 8

About 3 months ago a driver that wasn't paying attention drove off the road and hit my dog Rufus

Answer 9

This is what it is about